Post by sharonh on Jun 18, 2004 14:38:22 GMT 1
Hi everyone,
Welcome to my fan fiction. now I have written this sort of thing before, but have never got to put it on a board, so any feedback will be greatly appreciated, as I am nervous!
CharactersThe King family
Charity
The King family, along with Charity, Tom's PA and new lover was enjoying lunch on the patio of Holdgate Farm on a lovely warm day. Holdgate actually belonged to Tom, who had recently bought it from the local buisness woman Zoe Tate after returning to the village after a 20 year absence. He had also snatched the garbage contract of the local council off of her too. Holgate also housed his grown up children, eldest son Jimmy, his wife Sadie , middle son Matthew, and youngest son, Carl. The lads also helped their Dad with the buisness, a rea family affair. Sadie also helped since returning from her travels overseas, and it's also since she has returned that she has found Charity, the new PA with her feet well and truly under the Kings Table. This had annoyed Sadie especially as she knows
of Charity's reputation of snaring rich millionaires to give her the luxurious lifestyle she so craves. She had already snared the last millionaire of the village, the late Chris Tate, only he tried to frame her for his murder when he found out about her long standing affair with cousin Cain, and that she was still involved in it. He was actually dying of a brain tumour, but could not forgive Charity for her infidelity, so ended his life early, and hoped to frame her for it in the meantime. Trouble was she had been aquitted and so, that didn't work, and now she was after Tom to get that lifestyle back - something Sadie had quickly latched on to, and knew exactly what her plan would be, the main man with all the money would be easier than going for one of the remaining unnatched sons.
'It will be nice to see Anne and George again'! Sadie commented, referring to the dinner party they were holding for some family friends.
'Yes'! Tom agrees.
Charity shot him a look. What dinner party? She didn't know anything about this and who was George and Anne? More importantly why hadn't Tom invited her?
Tom declined to look at her, knowing full well what the look would be like since he had deliberately 'forgotten' to invite her. She wasn't George and Anne's 'sort' of friend, and they wouldn't take to her and her attitude.
Sadie on the other hand smiled quietly to herself, knowing what she had said and knowing that Charity would have quickly caught on and woul demand to know why she hadn't been invited.
As they carried on their luch in the glowing sunshine, although the atmosphere from Charity's end made it decidely cool, they were unaware of them being watched from a distance.....
Chapter 2 on it's way soon!
Welcome to my fan fiction. now I have written this sort of thing before, but have never got to put it on a board, so any feedback will be greatly appreciated, as I am nervous!
CharactersThe King family
Charity
The King family, along with Charity, Tom's PA and new lover was enjoying lunch on the patio of Holdgate Farm on a lovely warm day. Holdgate actually belonged to Tom, who had recently bought it from the local buisness woman Zoe Tate after returning to the village after a 20 year absence. He had also snatched the garbage contract of the local council off of her too. Holgate also housed his grown up children, eldest son Jimmy, his wife Sadie , middle son Matthew, and youngest son, Carl. The lads also helped their Dad with the buisness, a rea family affair. Sadie also helped since returning from her travels overseas, and it's also since she has returned that she has found Charity, the new PA with her feet well and truly under the Kings Table. This had annoyed Sadie especially as she knows
of Charity's reputation of snaring rich millionaires to give her the luxurious lifestyle she so craves. She had already snared the last millionaire of the village, the late Chris Tate, only he tried to frame her for his murder when he found out about her long standing affair with cousin Cain, and that she was still involved in it. He was actually dying of a brain tumour, but could not forgive Charity for her infidelity, so ended his life early, and hoped to frame her for it in the meantime. Trouble was she had been aquitted and so, that didn't work, and now she was after Tom to get that lifestyle back - something Sadie had quickly latched on to, and knew exactly what her plan would be, the main man with all the money would be easier than going for one of the remaining unnatched sons.
'It will be nice to see Anne and George again'! Sadie commented, referring to the dinner party they were holding for some family friends.
'Yes'! Tom agrees.
Charity shot him a look. What dinner party? She didn't know anything about this and who was George and Anne? More importantly why hadn't Tom invited her?
Tom declined to look at her, knowing full well what the look would be like since he had deliberately 'forgotten' to invite her. She wasn't George and Anne's 'sort' of friend, and they wouldn't take to her and her attitude.
Sadie on the other hand smiled quietly to herself, knowing what she had said and knowing that Charity would have quickly caught on and woul demand to know why she hadn't been invited.
As they carried on their luch in the glowing sunshine, although the atmosphere from Charity's end made it decidely cool, they were unaware of them being watched from a distance.....
Chapter 2 on it's way soon!
;D