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Post by Juli on May 28, 2005 15:04:13 GMT 1
It's pouring with rain (typical bank holiday) so I thought I'd have a bash.....can't proclaim to be anything great right enough _________________________________________ Viv and Emily are behind the shop counter. Amelia walks in EMILY: Can I help you? AMELIA: I hope so. I'm looking for directions to the King's house EMILY: Oh they have more than one, which of them are you looking for? AMEILIA: Any of them really Carl walks in. Viv points VIV Will he do? Carl looks puzzled. Amelia turns round and smiles AMEILA Hello stranger..... Carl looks stunned CARL Amelia..... AMELIA Long time no see Carl. It's good to see you Carl smiles CARL Good to see you too Carl and Amelia hug CARL You've changed so much Amelia smiles AMELIA For the better I hop CARL SMILES CARL Definately. I didn't know you were coming to visit Amelia winks AMELIA I was just passing CARL Of course you were. Sadie is going to go ballistic AMELIA Good. Now are you going to take me to see everyone else or not? CARL Sure, let's go Carl and Amelia walk out leavng Viv desperate to know who this newcomer is
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Post by alexcase on May 28, 2005 15:52:30 GMT 1
Viv's not the only one - A secret King Girl seems very popular in fan fictions - looking forward to more
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Post by charity7 on May 28, 2005 20:41:57 GMT 1
Me too, i wonder what Sadie and Amelia have between them...very intriguing!!
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Post by Juli on May 28, 2005 21:07:35 GMT 1
Tom and Matt are in the office. Carl pops his head round the door CARL Hi y a TOM Carl, I thought you were going to the ladnfill site? CARL I was, but I bumped into someone in the shop. Bet you'll never guess who? Tom looks puzzled. Matt shrugs MATT Do tell Carl walks in and holds the door open for Amelia AMELIA Hello Tom smiles AMELIA I hope you don't mind me just turning up like this Tom and Amelia hug TOM Of course not. You're family Amelia smiles AMELIA It's so good to see you. Hey Matt Matt kisses her on the cheek MATT How are you kid? AMELIA I'm good. You? MATT I'm great. It's good to see you TOM Yes, it's been too long. How long are you with us for? A while I hope Amelia smiles AMELIA That depends if I can crash on someone's sofa TOM We'll always find space for you sweetheart, you know that CARL You can have my spare room Tom smiles TOM That's that sorted then. Hae you seen Jimmy and Sadie yet? AMELIA Not yet no, I've just arrived. Jimmy hasn't taken her back again has he? Matt laughs MATT You know what Jimmy's like AMELIA Even still. I thought after all that with the wedding and the robbery he would have learned TOM I'm heading over to meet them for a drink in the Wooly just now CARL You can surprise her Carl, Matt and Amelia all laugh sarcastically. Tom frowns AMELIA She'll love that TOM She'll be pleased to see you AMELIA We'll see Tom walks out, Amelia follows then Carl and Matt. Matt is still laughing mischeviously
Tom, Matt and Carl are sitting at a table in the Woolpack. Jimmy and Sadie walk in MATT Now the fun begins Carl and Matt giggle TOM I've got the drinks in. Grab a seat Jimmy notices an extra drink on the table JIMMY Have we got company? Amelia walks out of the ladies and smiles AMELIA You sure have Jimmy and Sadie both look stunned. Jimmy smiles and hugs Amelia JIMMY Amelia!! AMELIA Hi Jimmy JIMMY It's been too long AMELIA I've been off travelling the world JIMMY Sounds great AMELIA It was Amelia looks at Sadie. Sadie's face is dark with rage AMELIA Hello Sadie SADIE Why did you just turn up out of the blue? Did you not think to phone first? Do you have no manners? AMELIA It's nice to see you. I'm fine thanks for asking CARL She looks great doesn't she? Sadie shoots a glowering look at Carl CARL She's female. That's the only pre-requisite for you. You can't stay with us, we don't have the room AMELIA I'm staying with Carl SADIE Very cosy. You are going home tomorrow AMELIA I'm planning to stay a bit longer actually SADIE That wasn't a request AMELIA Neither was mine TOM Come on Sadie, Amelia is family. It'll be good to catch up with her SADIE I thought you were off travelling the world? AMELIA I was, but I'm back now SADIE I suppose Daddy paid for it all AMELIA No I worked my way. Dad didn't pay a penny actually. We may be sisters.......but I'm not liek you in that respect Amelia sits down and drinks with the family. Sadie looks furious, but joins in anyway knowing how much the King's adore her younger half-sister
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Post by alexcase on May 28, 2005 22:02:48 GMT 1
half-sisters, eh? Very interesting...interesting to see where Sadie's jealousy leads to.
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Post by Juli on May 28, 2005 22:39:59 GMT 1
Tom, Sadie, Jimmy, Matt, Carl and Amelia are sitting round the table all looking slightly tense JIMMY Isn't this nice, all of us together? SADIE It was supposed to be a family evening TOM And doesn't Amelia joining us make it extra special Amelia smiles AMELIA Aw thank you Tom Sadie looks furious SADIE I don't imagine Daddy will be too pleased when he finds out you are here AMELIA He already knows. He knows I'll be well looked after here so he's happy with it Tom puts his arm round Amelia TOM And we're happy to have you here. You know......Mary and I often wished for a daughter Tom looks a little sad TOM Don't get me wrong you boys meant the world to us, but Mary would hve loved a girl. You 2 girls are like daughters to me Amelia smiles. Sadie looks gutted ------------ Carl and Amelia walk up to the house door. Amelia waves as Tom dirves past. She waves as Sadie and Jimmy drive pas - Sadie looks absolutely livid. Carl and Amelia go inside ------------ Carl is sitting on the sofa. Amelia comes in (wearing PJ's) and sits down next to him CARL You ok. You've been very quiet Amelia smiles sadly AMELIA Just thinking CARL About Sadie? Amelia brings her knees up to her chest AMELIA Among other things. Maybe I shouldn't have come. I thought I could - just stick the knife into her, but I guess I'm really not as cold as she is CARL Of course you're not Amelia smiles CARL Sadie is only a witch to you because she's jealous Amelia smiles AMELIA I know. It's silly, she has no reason to be.......She has everything. She always has done CARL You are younger than her....smarter than her....prettier than her... Amelia laughs. Carl puts his hand on her knee CARL It's true. You are so much nicer than Sadie in every way Amelia pats his hand AMELIA Thanks CArl Carl smiles. They link fingers CARL However the main reason she is jealous of you is because everyone likes you and no-one likes her Amelia and Carl laugh and cuddle up on the sofa I'm on a roll with this - but plase let me know if it's rubbish and I'll stop!
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Post by eithne on May 29, 2005 13:28:50 GMT 1
That is brilliant! I almost had my out while reading it! I really like the bitchiness between the two half-sisters. Amelia seems to be a lot nicer than Sadie anyway. I wonder if she'll expose any of her sister's dark secrets?
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Post by alexcase on May 29, 2005 13:36:14 GMT 1
Its brillaint any fanfiction that involves the King's is good. I can see Carl and Amelia getting together and maybe Sadie being driven to doing something evil.
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Post by eithne on May 29, 2005 13:53:47 GMT 1
We do have a lot of fan fiction on the Kings don't we? Must have at least 10/12 stories.
I'm not complaining though - I'm absolutly delighted that so many people are trying their hand at writing a story. And everybody is doing very well with their stories.
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Post by Juli on May 29, 2005 17:32:20 GMT 1
Thank guys!! I'm really enjoying writing this!!
Carl is putting on his jacket. Amelia comes downstairs CARL Morning Sleepyhead AMELIA Morning, you should have woken me CARL Dad's summoned us all for a family lunch in the Wooly Amelia smiles AMELIA Excellent Carl pretends to looks sad CARL I know it's going to spoil it for yo, but Sadie won't be there Amelia shakes her head AMELIA I'm gutted. It won't be the same without her They both laugh CARL See you there at 1 Carl kisses her cheek and leaves. Amelia watches his walk away and smiles
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Sadie is sitting on the sofa (in their new built house). Jimmy is putting on his jacket JIMMY We're having lunch at 1 Sadie draws him a look SADIE Lucky you Jimmy looks exacerbated JIMMY Dad would like you to be there SADIE Sitting around listening to Amelia's tales of travelling isn't my idea of fun Jimmy JIMMY LIFTS UP HIS BRIEFCASE SADIE I do wish Tom would stop ecouraging her to stay - and Carl for that matter JIMMY Carl's always had a soft spot for her, you know that SADIE Don't I just JIMMY Well she's here now SADIE She's not staying JIMMY KISSES HER CHEEK AND WALKS OUT. SADIE PUTS DONW HER MAKE-UP SADIE She knows far too much to let that happen
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Tom, Matt, Carl, Kimmy and Max are sitting at a table in the Woolpack TOM Is Sadie coming? JIMMY SHRUGS JIMMY I don't think so MAX What is is with her and Mel? Why do they hate each other? CARL Mel doesn't hate Sadie - it's Sadie who has the problem MATT That's because Sadie's a..... TOM (Butts in) Matthew, enough thank you Matt, Carl and Max laugh TOM It's hard for people who have step-families and broken marriages. You boys should thank yourself lucky Tom picks up his drink TOM Those girls dealt with a lot when they were young, especially Sadie Amelia walks in. Max stands up MAX Mel, good to see you Max and Amelia hug AMELIA How are you Max? MAX I'm good. What's your poison? AMELIA White wine please Max goes to the bar. Amelia sits down smiling
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They are all sitting around the table. Max brings over Amelia's wine and sits down. She raises her glass AMELIA Cheers everyone They all raise their glasses and take a drink AMELIA No Sadie? JIMMY She had a meeting Amelia raises her eyebrows AMELIA Shame TOM How are your parents love? Amelia looks sad AMELIA Not too great to be honest. Apart they are fine, together it's not so good at the moment TOM Sorry to hear that. I'm sure they'll sort it out though, they're a strong couple Amelia smiles AMELIA I hope so MAX So how long are you around for? AMELIA I'm not sure. I had hoped to stay for a few weeks, but I'm not sure now TOM Why not? It's lovely to have you around CARL Yeah, and you know you can stay with me for as long as you like AMELIA SMILES AMELIA Thanks and it's great to see you guys, I've missed you all, but I don't want to cause trouble MATT Don't let Sadie bother you, we don't Matt winks. Amelia laughs AMELIA Even still, this is her home and you guys are her.... TOM Stop right there young lady. You are family too, just the saem as Sadie. You are staying. You leave Sadie to me AMELIA Aw thanks Tom Amelia smiles, she has a mischevious glint in her eye, and take a drink of her wine
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Post by snail on Jul 6, 2005 17:27:11 GMT 1
more
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Post by coven on Jul 28, 2005 16:16:57 GMT 1
Sadies worst nigtmare is her own face....period
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Post by Juli on Aug 2, 2005 22:53:06 GMT 1
I've been off home for my holidays - i'll try get more up when i get a chance
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Post by susan84 on Aug 6, 2005 16:06:35 GMT 1
Hi, Great script, maybe you should send it to the Writers at Emmerdale.
Looking forward to the next installment, I like to hear Sadie suffering haha!!
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Post by Juli on Aug 20, 2005 20:37:06 GMT 1
Sorry about the delay guys. I've just moved house and a bundle of stuff went missing - including the computer disk with the next part of this on it. I'll have to br re-writing it I've got another story on disk that I'll stick up in the meantime to see what you think
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Post by Juli on Aug 22, 2005 17:11:39 GMT 1
Righty - I have a dilema over this.........
i've lost the re-written ending bit of this story, but I do have my original attempt which included Mel and Charity basically taking on Sadie
so.......will I post that instead of leaving it hanging as it is as I dont' really have time to re-write it again??
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Post by eithne on Aug 31, 2005 22:55:02 GMT 1
Just caught up on what I've missed since I posted last and I love it! It is up to you what version you post, though I think it would be better to go for which one is better for you.
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Post by mandy on Sept 1, 2005 9:24:41 GMT 1
This is really good stuff - when I read it, it is like I am watching it - Carl is so true to life.
Thanks for posting.
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Post by lou261 on Sept 1, 2005 13:27:35 GMT 1
Same here when you read it it fells llike your watching it .. cant wait for more
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Post by Juli on Sept 1, 2005 20:31:26 GMT 1
Thank yo so much for all your kind words
I'm going to concentrate on getting the original one up on the other thread for now
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