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Post by rtzen01 on Feb 6, 2008 21:34:04 GMT 1
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Post by missking on Feb 7, 2008 16:42:54 GMT 1
please post more soon i love this story and cant wait to see what heppens next
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Post by maryg on Feb 9, 2008 4:27:08 GMT 1
Aaron had been here 3 day and everything had gone to plan even Thomas was making an effort to get along with everyone both Chas amd Carl had been surprised how much he two boys actually got along together, Chas had to have a few early nights as she had ot tired but they where all expecting that as she was still recovering , Aaron had asked could he stay over until the school term started witch Matt disapproved of but Jimmy soon talked him round, Scarlet and Carrie had visited a few times as well had dinner with them a few times and Carl and Chas couldn't help notice how much Scarlet got along with Aaron they seemed to hit it off quite well.it was 28th and Carrie and Scarlet had been in home farm all day .
would you like to do something today Scarlet asked Aaron , erm what would you like to do Aaron replied, Dunno Scarlet said go the pictures or something , oh sorry I can't Aaron continued I have promised Thomas I would hang out here with him today , Aaron said i a sheepish voice, Carl was sitting nearby reading his paper and over heard the conversation,Thomas will be OK Carl said without even lifting his head from the paper if you two want to go I'll explain to Thomas Carl said, Erm Erm no its OK I wont let him down, Why Scarlet said its only a movie I know I cant I promised Thomas Aaron said walking out the room, suit yourself Scarlet said as Carl lifted his head as Aaron was just leaving the room.
Scarlet saw Carl looking at Aaron , whats up with him she said to Carl as Carl stood up, let me have a word he said as he ushered Scarlet into the living room where Aaron had found a seat, Can I have a word Aaron Carl said , as scarlet entered the room and sat down with a disappointed look on her face, sensing the mood Chas jumped up, Whats up she asked Carl fearing a bad exchange of words had took place, Dont be daft Carl said as he pulled Aaron into the kitchen , every think is fine he said as he placed around Aaron's neck, So you gunna tell me whats up or not he asked Aaron , Nothing Aaron replied, Yes there is Carl continued ,Your skint arnt yeah, No Aaron said am not looking at the floor, look Carl said I dont mind shouting you two the pictures , no Aaron said you have bought me enough, and anyway I promised Thomas, let me worry about Thomas go out with Scarlet, Aaron ignored Carl and Carl could see Aaron was embarrassed , OK then here is the deal, you babysit Thomas and ANYA ON NEW YEARS EVE JUST FOR ONE HOUR AND I will pay for the pictures how about that and you can take Scarlet I will give you enough to pay for her too.Aaron suddenly had a smile on his face, He could now take scarlet out without feeling he owed any money out.
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Post by maryg on Feb 9, 2008 4:39:03 GMT 1
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Post by rtzen01 on Feb 10, 2008 18:20:29 GMT 1
nope its not rubbish, really good liking this with aaron and scarrlet, wonder if carl wants aaron to look after tom and anya on new years eve so him and chas can have some time on their own ??. Great update, please post more soon |
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Post by rtzen01 on Feb 16, 2008 19:36:49 GMT 1
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Post by maryg on Feb 17, 2008 1:23:54 GMT 1
New Years Eve.
It was new year eve and Carl had arranged to take Chas to the woolley for the last hour Aaron was going to babysit and he had asked Scarlet to sit with him .
I don't care what you say I am not taking that stupid Wheel chair Chas said to Carl as they were both getting ready to go out, OK Carl replied but no over doing it or Ill just ring the taxi early and you will have no choice but to get in it. Chas just ignored Carl at this point she found it better lately to say nothing when he started on one of his speeches let him think he knew best, he had become such a worrier lately and she knew he was only looking out for her but it was like he was talking to the kids sometimes, sometimes she found it funny other times she was flattered by it but there where times when it just plain annoying her,Carl noticed Chas was a little put out ,
Whats up he asked as he saw the frown on her face , nothing Chas replied , OK Carl said carrying on getting dressed , well yes there is actually Carl, Chas replied am an adult , I wish you would treat me like one sometimes I know your looking out for me but it gets quite annoying . OK am sorry Carl replied and walked over to her , but you will look after yourself wont you , Carl said holding Chas round the waist,Yes I will and if am tired am sure Dianne will let me go and have a lie down if I need to .Carl smiled and said I never really thought of that .
They arrived at the pub a little earlier than expected , Jimmy and Matthew where already there, Carl had text them when they where on there way and asked them to get them a drink in , Larger ,Carl replied Chas can't drink she is still on antibiotics , Oh shut up Carlos Matt replied she can have one or two its new years eve,actually I can have a few more than that Chas replied I haven't took any tablets today, What Carl said with a slightly raised voice , this is what I mean he continued you ask me to stop going on at you then you do stupid things like this, Oh shut up Carl Matt replied the girl wants a good time leave her alone , OK Carl replied sitting down looking quite annoyed.
I'm going to have a word with Dianne Chas said to Carl, as she was beginning to stand up , yeah why not Carl replied , its not like what I think makes a difference anyway , Chas just rolled her eyes at Carl and left the table.
You should lay off her a bit Matt said its been a week since she got home you cant wrap her up in cotton wool forever Matt said,yeah I know Jimmy replied he does seem a little over protective at the moment doesn't he , shut up will yeah I'm just looking out for her thats all , Matt started laughing at him , what Carl said , Carlos, Matt replied if you wanted a bird you can order round I think you chose the wrong one, you will never get the better of her, and if I'm not mistaking , Matt leaned into Carl's face, I'm sure thats what you found sexy about her in the first place ,you always liked the feisty ones, if you wanted someone you could order about you should never have gone for a dingle , Matt and Jimmy both started to laugh and Carl looked over at the bar where Chas was standing talking to Dianne and also agreed , I know he replied Ive no chance have I she's definitely always going to be the boss, and he started laughing.
Come on then your round Jimmy said showing Carl his empty glass , OK same again is it Carl said standing up to go to the bar.
Can I interest you in another drink Carl sad to Chas acting like he had only just met her, ooh well I don't know Chas replied , it depends on what you want in return she continued, oh I don't know maybe a kiss at midnight then a night cap at mine , OOH I think I can manage that Chas said, ooh I cant wait Carl replied ,Anyway you've lightened up whats with the change of heart, Jimmy and Matthew told you off Chas continued. Something like that Carl replied ,Same again Dianne and one for yourself, Carl give Chas a kiss on the Cheek and went back to the table with the drinks.
You two been OK then Dianne asked Chas as Carl left the bar , Yeah he gets abit over bearing sometimes though , I think its with every think thats happened not just the sickness but the blackmail and the murder and stuff , its like he is waiting for something else to go wrong , So are you sorry you took him back then Dianne continued, Hell no I love him now more than ever , most of the time he is great its just , Chas paused I wish this court case was over so he would calm down and we could know what to do about the kids, We haven't even told them we are getting married yet, so your still going to marry him, Oh Dianne I should not have told you , we need to tell the kids first don't say nothing will you, no Chas I wont but are you sure after everything are you sure, Dianne one thing I am sure of is how much he loves me and you know how much I have always loved him.Anyway Chas continued its quarter to twelve I had better go back over to him , You better had or nobody will be getting served Dianne laughed.
Chas pulled her chair closer to Carl's as to sit closer to him he immediately put his arm around her chair .
you OK he asked ,Carl, Chas said , What Carl replied , I thought we talked about this I will tell you if am not OK . OK Carl said laughing as he leaned over and kissed her, look Chas said I clipped up to Dianne about us getting married so I think we should tell kids tomorrow, Well Ive been saying that all week Carl replied, so you finally asked her again Matt replied , Glutton for punishment you are Matt said to Chas you had the chance to get out of it and you never took it shurup Matt Carl replied she loves me dont you babe , Carl and Chas leaned over to kiss each other just on the stroke of midnight , everyone was singing and Carl and Chas just sat kissing each other all the way through it.
You going to put her down sometime tonight Matt interrupted, Carl and Chas broke off, no I don't think I am Carl said pulling Chas as close to him as possible. Oh get me a bucket Matt replied , don't know about a bucket Carl replied but you can share my taxi, No Thank you Carlos am staying for another its a 12.30 bar . what you want to do Carl asked Chas, Call a cab Chas replied leaning into Carl , Tell you what Carl said I will get another then call a cab we will probably have it drank by the time it comes. Carl got Chas a drink and they went outside and sat on the bench and just held each other until the Taxi came .
by the time the taxi came it was 1am and Matthew and Jimmy where waiting with them , like you bid Carl Matt said I must say she is better than the last one you bought home , Carl knew Matt was winding him up over grace, shurup Matt Carl said , awwww hit a sore point little brov Matt replied, Matt jimmy said leave it out , What Matt said am only saying Chas is better than the last bird thats all , Yeah Carl said well why don't you just mind your own business OK, Chas sensed Carl's anger , whats up with you she asked , nothing heres our taxi , Carl said as the taxi pulled up get in Carl said as he pushed Chas through the door and jumped in himself shutting the door quick so as not to let Matt and Jimmy the Taxi. Well you care to explain Chas said , Carl tried to ignore her and put his arm around Chas , no get off it was that copper wasn't it you still have feelings for her , no I don't Carl said , so why the response then Chas replied , leave it hey Carl said , no Chas replied if you have feelings for her I need to know , there is nothing to know now just leave it Carl replied.
the rest of the journey was in silence and instead of sitting close they where actually sitting at each end of the back seat.
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Post by rtzen01 on Feb 17, 2008 9:29:07 GMT 1
great update, oo wonder if he does maybe have slight feelings left for grace or not. It was a realy long update, Excelant. Please post more soon so we can see what happens next |
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Post by porlock2000 on Feb 17, 2008 12:00:58 GMT 1
Really enjoyed it! Please post more soon!!
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Post by maryg on Feb 17, 2008 14:35:29 GMT 1
great update, oo wonder if he does maybe have slight feelings left for grace or not. It was a realy long update, Excelant. Please post more soon so we can see what happens next I know I always get carried away lol |
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Post by xxxmeganxxx on Feb 17, 2008 16:32:45 GMT 1
Loving this story, update soon |
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Post by missking on Feb 18, 2008 17:46:53 GMT 1
its great i cant wait to see what happens nx i do hope carl and chas sort things and get married
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Post by rtzen01 on Feb 22, 2008 21:49:28 GMT 1
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Post by maryg on Feb 22, 2008 22:07:13 GMT 1
will do soon promise
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Post by maryg on Feb 25, 2008 12:58:13 GMT 1
When the taxi arrive at Home farm Carl and Chas had hardly spoken a word to each other and Carl was annoyed he had let Matt spoil things yet again. He was thinking to himself why had he reacted like that , he knew he had never loved Grace like he loved Chas , he had shocked himself at how easy Matthew had got to him and he was worried how he was going to explain to Chas how he felt. But deep down he always thought this was going to come up sooner or later , he also knew Chas would get upset over his relationship with Grace , witch is why he hadn't bought it up in the first place.Deep down though he thought it was for the best that it had come up as he needed to come to terms with what had happened.
Look Carl said as they where standing at the door , I will explain every think but lets not let the kids see any think is wrong , Oh yeah Chas replied lets not tell them your in love with someone else, Carl grabbed Chas's arm and pulled her toward him , he looked her straight in the eye , no am not I love you and always have done , you knew I had issues Chas when you took me back we just have to work through them , Carl paused , please lets not worry the kids they've been through enough, and do you really want Aaron going back saying were always fighting , OK just lets get in Chas said its freezing out here.
when they got inside they where surprised to see Aaron and Scarlet had fell asleep watching a film, Chas and Carl couldn't help but smile at each other watching how peaceful they both looked , as Scarlet had fell asleep with her head on Aaron's knee , and he had fell asleep sitting up, Wounder what Daz would make of this Carl said still smiling , I think thats over isn't it ,am sure I heard her telling someone the other day , Chas replied , so it would seem Carl said as he went over to wake them both up. Come on you two Carl said ruffling their hair , Bed time , and I'm sure you should have been home by now Carl reminded Scarlet , Mum said I could stay she replied , You sure thats not like your mum , Yeah well she had been drinking and we could not get a taxi, so we had no choice, OK Carl replied you can get in with Anya , why Scarlet replied I have my own room here why sleep with Anya, because I can keep my eye on you there, now come on get to bed, don't you trust me Scarlet continued , yes I just don't trust him pointing at Aaron , both Aaron and Chas give Carl a disapproving look , Chas noticed Aaron's face had reddened with embarrassment and turned and give Carl an even worse look ,what Carl said , They just stood still looking at him, look Carl continued I was sixteen once you know I know what goes through their minds , Scarlet left the room unhappy at the thought of sharing , Carl , Chas said don't judge everyone by your own standards, and walked out the room with Aaron and headed for bed.Carl followed quickly relising he had put his foot in it once again, hey he said catching upto Aaron Am sorry I didn't mean to accuse you of any think its OK Aaron said as he walked to his room , Carl decided to leave it and just go and join Chas in bed.
So now you have two reasons not to speak to me ,Carl said as he was getting into bed, Chas just ignored him , I was only looking out for Scarlet how is that so wrong, Its not Chas replied I happened to agree with you its just that you had to embarrass them didn't you , honestly Carl you have no tact , their kids they get embarrassed about things like that , Chas , Carl said lads don't get embarrassed , Carl , Chas replied Aaron was mortified and as I said downstairs don't judge everyone by your standards, OK Carl replied I will have a word in the morning , Am sorry OK, OK Chas answered as she turned over,
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Carrie had arrived early she had arranged to help Jimmy prepare dinner , Jimmy was up as he had arranged to let her in , and Thomas was up playing on his playstation 3, everyone else was in bed,
where's Scarlet Jimmy said letting Carrie in . she's here I hope ,Carrie replied I told her she could stay over, well she isn't in her room I checked last night , suddenly they both looked at one another worried, just then Scarlet walked in she had heard the conversation, she saw their faces and knew what they where thinking, So you two don't trust me either , well at least Aaron isn't here so you can totally embarrass us, What Jimmy asked confused, Ask Carl ,Scarlet replied as she was pouring out her serial clearly upset, ask Carl what Carrie replied, nothing Scarlet replied,
Any coffee ready Carl said as he walked in the kitchen , grabbing a piece of toast out the toast rack Carrie had just made for Scarlet, thats mine Scarlet reminded Carl, awwwww whats up Carl replied jokingly not have a nice sleep, Scarlet stood up to walk into the other room where Thomas was, hey am sorry Carl said tugging her arm back I didn't mean to embarrass you am sorry , Scarlet ignored him and walked out the room.
What the hell have you done now Jimmy asked your always upsetting someone , yeah I know , I was just looking out for her , so where did she sleep and how did you upset her, Carl explained what happened much to Jimmy and Carries amusement , you really haven't got any tact have you Jimmy replied , no it didn't help having Matt wind me up either I swear Jimmy am going to swing for him one day, Come on Carl Jimmy said ,you did over react, Yeah well Carl said now not only Scarlet and Aaron aren't speaking to me but Chas is on my back too.
So why the overreaction anyway, Jimmy asked , Carl sighed as he sat down at the kitchen table, Jim , am not denying I had feelings for Grace in a way yeah I did love her ,You know Jim for a few months she kept me sane, but I never loved her like I loved Chas , That day when she was killed you know Jim I was going with her I told her the truth we was going in together to tell the truth , and she ended up under a lorry ,Why I still don't know , was it an accident or deliberate , but Jimmy the truth is if it wasn't for me she would be alive, and here I am living my life as if she never existed, I feel guilty Jimmy , I mean she hasn't even got a headstone no-one cares Jimmy ,both Jimmy and Carrie could see he was sincere, You really need to tell Chas how you feel Jimmy said or it will never go away , Yeah Carl said with a ironic laugh , this is Chas were talking about you know . You might be surprised Carrie replied as she offered Carl some tissue for his eyes.
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Post by maryg on Feb 25, 2008 13:54:12 GMT 1
Dont know whether I have controdicted myself in this update, I dont think I have as I remember stating I was starting after the affair ended but if I have and you noticed please let me know and I will modify as 9 pages is a lot to look back on.
hoping to post another update today as I dont know when I will be able to do another after today.
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Post by missking on Feb 25, 2008 15:54:01 GMT 1
its great i loved it i cant wait to read more
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Post by rtzen01 on Feb 25, 2008 17:43:45 GMT 1
Great thanks for updating maryg. No i dont think you contrdicted yourself, it all makes sense to me hope you post more soon |
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Post by maryg on Feb 25, 2008 18:28:29 GMT 1
After a morning of getting ignored of virtually every one except Jimmy and Carrie , Carl sat down for dinner at the table as usual , he was sat next to Chas and opposite Matt, who for some reason had also ignored him all morning , The atmosphere around the table wasn't very good and Carl knew he had to break the ice , as for Matt he couldn't care less , his relationship with Matt had never been a good one since Carl was a child he would always side with his dad when Carl got bullied and called names and as they grew older Matt took the bullying over when his dad had eased off , Carl was starting to resent Matt now and he never cared if he never spoke to him again. but yet on the other hand Matt could be supportive and Carl wondered if Matt acted like this through habit rather than the fact they never got on.Carl never knew but he knew it was a problem that also needed putting right but just not right now.
Aaron , Carl said I was out of order last night mate , I had a bit to much to drink and things came out the wrong way I should never assume you would take advantage , and I suppose I should have trusted you a little more as well Scarlet ,Carl continued, scarlet just looked at Carl , yeah well she said your my brother thats it so don't think you can tell me what to do , Hey Carrie jumped in yes he can , and actually I think he was right , not very tactful but right anyway , its OK Aaron replied I understand, so Can we all start talking now Carl said instead of ignoring each other , Yeah Aaron said I'll get my own back in a bit on the ps3, Yeah Carl said we'll see , Dad Ive beet him three times already today Thomas jumped in, oh yeah squirt and how many times have I beet you, Carl was pleased although Scarlet was still a little quiet the atmosphere had got alot better.
After dinner Scarlet and Aaron decided on doing the dishes so they could have time on their own , Carl and Chas was sitting in the parlor with Thomas and Anya Carrie Jimmy and Matt had gone to the woolly for a drink. Carl had almost forgot about the whole Grace argument as he was just happy Aaron was speaking to him again although he thought Scarlet would come round .
Right I think now is a good time to tell the kids about us , what do you think Carl asked Chas, as he took hold of her hand in his.Chas looked at Carl and moved his hand from hers, Your unbelievable, she said as she looked him in the eye, what now Carl replied, you act like you did last night with Matt and expect me to act like nothing has happened just carry on like it was nothing , Thats because it isn't anything Carl replied , Oh don't take me for an idiot Chas said you still have feelings for her am not stupid, don't expect me to come second to a dead person Carl , especially one who I didn't like. Carl couldn't believe she had said that she never knew Grace how could she not like her, she was a very nice person actually Carl replied, Yeah I bet she was Chas carried on, So come on then Chas , Carl asked why are you jealous of a dead person , Because Carl it would have been her you were marrying if she was still alive, Oh you think so do you, yeah Chas said I do. right get your coat on Carl said am going to sort this out once and for all. What where are we going just get your coat on , you want proof how much I love you you have to come with me, Carl walked out the room and went to ask Scarlet and Aaron to babysit, To witch Scarlet wasn't impressed , Sure you can trust us she said as they where putting the last of the dishes away, Come on Scarlet Ive apologized am sorry and it was because I love you thats all ,your a creep Scarlet said as she hit him with the tea towel , so is that a yes then Carl asked.suppose so Scarlet replied where you going any way, Oh am just taking Chas for a drive thats all we wont be long, so no funny business Carl said winking at them to Aaron's amusement shut up Scarlet said hitting him again with the tea towel. see you in a bit Carl said as he grabbed his keys and his coat and left with Chas.
so come on where you taking me, Chas asked Carl, you will find out soon enough Carl replied looking rather hurt, Carl and Chas where driving around for a while Carl not really going in any direction , Carl we have just been in this road , I know Carl said am looking for something , what Chas asked it don't matter here.s one Carl got out the car he walked into the shop , what the hell do you want a florist for , but he ignored her and just got out, he came back five minutes later with a large bouquet and threw them on the back seat. Chas looked puzzled ,what the hell is going on Carl she said , Carl never spoke for a minute , then he broke his silence You wanted this Chas , Carl said with a shaken Voice, Chas was worried she thought Carl was having some sort of breakdown , but in reality he knew he needed to do this to move his life on so they could both be happy.
Chas saw the cemetery approaching them and suddenly knew whose grave they where going to. Don't you dare tell me its her grave , Chas said as Carl drove through the gates,yeah well thats exactly where am taking you Carl said with a determined look on his face. well I wont go Chas said , Oh you will you said you wanted proof I love you , and believe me Chas I didn't want you her any more than you wanted to be here but I am marrying , and I need to prove how much I always loved you.
Carl please no , Chas protested I hate these places , tough Carl replied dragging her by her arm.
soon they arrived at the grave side there was a single red rose on the grass on line with the foot of the cross witch was the cross put there when she died, Carl knelt down and picked up the wilted rose and replaced it with the new fresh bouquet, Chas realised he rose was from him and new he had visited recently as the rose wasn't completely dead, tears streamed down Carl's face as he looked at Chas, you still think I loved her , well It surly looks like it from where I'm standing a shocked Chas said thinking Carl was admitting defeat, Carl walked around the back of the cross where he began to dig a small hole , he soon pulled out a tin and handed it to Chas while he filled the whole in knowing now that he would not need the tin again.
open it Carl said kneeling down looking at the flowers arranging them as he thought grace would like them .
Chas opened the tin and found two letters inside , read them Carl said , read them by date , Chas looked downwas at Carl who was still pottering around the grave unsure how Chas was going to react, Chas in shock as she started reading the letters.
28/9/2007
Chas recognized that it was the day after her death and knew Carl must have but it there at a later date.
Grace how can I apologies to you, for the last few months you have been my life you kept me going when I wanted to stop , you believed in me when I didn't believe in myself and you held me when I was at my weakest, I told you I loved you , and you loved me back , when ever things got me down you where always there and yet all this time I was using you for my own benefits , deep down Grace I knew you where using me to , as you thought it was Matthew, but when I told you it was me you still had faith why did you fall for me Grace . I tried to warn you , but all you could do was hold me , I am so sorry Grace . I decided you deserved the truth grace , It was the worst decision of my life I turned up at your flat I was so horrible to you Grace I said things I never meant as well as things I did , I told you I have never loved you that I always loved Chas , you said that was OK Grace you told me you knew , That I made you feel special , why did I make you feel special I am not special you to me Grace will always be special . thats when I broke down and told you the truth Grace about every think and although you knew you where going to loose me you still wanted to help me out , Help me get Chas back you said you talked me into telling the truth its the best way you said, thats when we made our way to the police station why Grace why why why.
love you Carlxxx
Chas looked down at Carl , her face tear stained ,Carl she said quietly, Carl replied read the next one,
18th 12 / 2007
Grace I don't know what to do you helped me get her back and now she is going to be taken away again, why is my life so complicated , why don't I get punished , I wish you had stayed here like we planned you would have given me the best advice I am sitting in this horrible room where the walls feel like they are closing in on me and here beside me is my life the life you helped give me back, I lost you Grace and I miss you so much but I cant lose Chas as-well as you and dad its to much for me to take , can you please put in a good word to that god of ours tell him I have had enough suffering , still missing your wonderful smile Grace
love Carlxxx
Chas looked down at Carl who was at this time talking to Grace he was telling her how pig headed Chas could be but he loved her more than anything in the world , Chas knelt down and held him as they both let out all their tears , to Carl he knew he had proved to Chas how much he loved her and with the help of Grace yet again. Chas , Carl said still with tears streaming she needs a headstone , what ever you want Chas replied,
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Post by missking on Feb 25, 2008 18:42:06 GMT 1
aw thats so sweet it was great i loved it cant wait to read more please post more soon
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Post by rtzen01 on Feb 25, 2008 18:57:52 GMT 1
Yet another great update, cant believe this story had lasted 9 pages  Cant wait to see what happens next. Please post more soon |
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Post by porlock2000 on Feb 25, 2008 20:26:08 GMT 1
Great stuff!
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Post by missking on Feb 29, 2008 19:12:28 GMT 1
please post more soon
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Post by rtzen01 on Mar 1, 2008 22:16:20 GMT 1
please post more soon cant wait to se what happens next |
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Post by maryg on Mar 1, 2008 22:27:19 GMT 1
10 pages , It maybe time I called it a day I did want to get a year but naybe I was kidding myself.
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Post by missking on Mar 1, 2008 22:34:32 GMT 1
its great i loved it if you have finished writing it i think its great well done xx
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Post by maryg on Mar 1, 2008 22:39:09 GMT 1
THANX Ill let you know
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Post by maryg on Mar 3, 2008 9:40:25 GMT 1
I ThINK I might try for that year after all.
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Post by maryg on Mar 3, 2008 12:02:25 GMT 1
When Carl and Chas got back in the car they decided they would tell the kids about the wedding ,as they needed to do it soon as Aaron would be going home soon, they had decided on just a small wedding with just family and a few Friends attending .
You do know Anya will want to be brides maid don't you Carl said to Chas , yeah I know Chas replied am sure we can stretch to that , thats if she is OK with it all Chas said, Oh she will be Carl replied am sure she will she likes you, yeah she does now wait until she thinks am going to take her mums place at the moment am just Chas when we are married it might be different , Chas said , look leave her to me Carl replied she will be fine.
When they arrived at Home farm all the kids where in the parlor the lads were playing computer games and Anya and Scarlet where playing with Anya's girls world .
Look Chas Anya said running over to Chas , Scarlet showed me how to do plaits in me girls world , and she said I can do one in her hair Oswell, Anya said shoving the Girls world at Chas.Yes sweet heart that is beautiful Chas replied looking at the doll.
Right lads put the game off now Carl said we All need to talk , Can we just finish this game Thomas replied there is only 2 minutes left and am winning 2-1 OK Carl replied but make that the last. I have to go now Scarlet said sensing that she wasn't wanted, Carl quickly realised she felt awkward and said no Scarlet you don't need to go you can stay its OK it sort of concerns you too. OK Scarlet said as she sat back down.
Yes I won Thomas said as Aaron switched off the game . right Carl said , come on all sit down me and Chas have something to tell you , We , just then Thomas butted in we know , you two are getting Married , What Carl said ,half laughing well is obvious Chas has a ring on and we have heard you , Aaron looked at Chas , he had a strange look on his face as if he was disappointed , Chas wasn't expecting Aaron to be funny about it she thought Carl's kids would but not Aaron as he was now 16 she thought he would he would understand more, she tried to block his response out as if she hadn't seen it , she thought she would deal with it when she got him on his own. So can I be brides made Anya asked , Carl and Chas looked at one another and laughed , of coarse you can love , Chas replied.
Aaron got up and walked into the kitchen , still looking rather put out, Carl and Chas both looked at each other and shrugged their shoulders as if they didn't have a clue, Scarlet followed Aaron out and into the kitchen, whats up Scarlet asked, nothin Aaron replied , so why are you so grumpy then , it doesn't matter Aaron said just leave me alone, no tell me , don't you want your mum to marry Carl is that it. it doesn't bother me really Aaron said , just leave me alone and get lost Aaron said nastily. OK be like that then Scarlet said as she walked back into the parlor,
When can I go home ,Aaron said following Scarlet into the parlor what Chas said I thought you where staying a couple more days Chas said , Ive changed my mind Aaron replied as he went to start to pack.Carl Scarlet and Chas all stood wondering why he was acting this way.Do you want me to have a word Carl asked, no Chas replied this is up to me , Chas followed Aaron out the room.
Aaron was throwing all his stuff into his bag , when Chas got to his room.Right you going to tell me whats going on Chas asked I thought you liked Carl, yeah Aaron replied but it doesn't mean I want you to marry him , No Chas said its more than that come on tell me what it is, just leave it Aaron said am going home , so you Can have your cozy little life with you two new kids , go on play mummy Aaron continued , That it Chas replied , I thought you where getting on with Thomas and Anya , any way, Oh come on Aaron Ive enjoyed having you here we can sort this out I know we can, Get lost Aaron said as he barged past Chas with his back pack over his shoulder.
Aaron come back here Chas shouted as Aaron ran down the stairs, I need to ring my dad to pick me up , Aaron said to Carl as he was putting his coat on .Ill take you Carl said , if thats what you really want, but I was hoping you would be happy for us , thanks Aaron replied can we go then, Carl picked up his keys and coat , Come on then Carl said walking to the door, Scarlet stood there shocked as Carl and Aaron walked out the door, Carl turned and looked at Chas who had a tear in her eye , don't worry he mouthed as he shut the door behind them.
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Post by missking on Mar 3, 2008 17:10:27 GMT 1
aw its great glad you decided to keep going with your story its amazing
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Cant wait to see what happens next. Please post more soon