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Post by rtzen01 on Mar 8, 2008 22:27:22 GMT 1
can't wait =]
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Sapphira
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Post by Sapphira on Mar 30, 2008 21:12:36 GMT 1
right-ho. i have made a descision.
I. WILL. UPDATE. THIS. TONIGHT.
hehe.
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Post by missking on Mar 30, 2008 21:33:43 GMT 1
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Post by Sapphira on Mar 30, 2008 22:07:01 GMT 1
Thanx for all your lovely comments evryone!! K this is not very Charl-y but hey here we go...
Chas laughed and brushed his fringe out of his eyes slightly.
Chas: You haven’t changed at all.
Dean: I know. I’m still as attractive as I ever was.
Chas looked around for Carl who was standing in the doorway with a stony expression on his face. She knew why.
Chas: Carl, this is Dean. He’s gay.
Dean: I AM N-
He was silenced by Chas’ heel digging into his foot.
Dean: I mean… I’m not happy with girls like you saying…
Carl: Girls like her?
Dean: Yeah. Pix is very…
Chas: Me and Dean are gonna go for a walk.
Chas walked to the door. As soon as they out of the kitchen, Dean’s body became uncomfortably close to hers. They walked down the road to the pavilion and walked inside. Chas could feel Dean’s breath on her neck. They both sat down inside.
Chas: Dean?
Dean: Yeah babe?
Chas: Don’t call me Pix in front of Carl.
Dean: Scared of him finding out of what it means?
Chas: Scared? I don’t think so.
Dean: Then what’s your problem?
Chas: Dean, those years are a long time ago. Whatever we had then – we don’t have it anymore.
Dean: Nah. I don’t think I’m happy with that. See, you and me, we got connections Pix.
Chas: Argh go prostitute yourself Dean. Find some other tart.
Dean: You never used to call me Dean. Remember what you used to call me? You called me-
Chas: Shut the hell up!
Dean: That guy back at your house. Carl. What is he to you?
Chas: He’s my boyfriend.
Dean: Really.
Chas: Yeah.
Dean: You look pregnant.
Chas: I am.
Dean: F***.
Chas: Want to be godfather?
Dean: Never lost your cheek. You’re the only person I ever let say bad things about you know. Any other girlfriend never dared. I’d never change anything about you Pix.
Chas: I still like you. You’re arrogant, annoying and violent. But I still lo- like you.
Dean: Slip of the tongue? I think not. I’d take you back. Even with that lump you’re carrying.
Chas smiled.
Dean saw her eyes widen and immediately took advantage of the moment, one hand on the back of her head and one on her cheek. He brought her lips close to his and kissed her hungrily. Chas’ free arms wrapped around his waist, bringing his body closer to hers. Lost in the heat of the moment Chas moved her hand up his shirt, initiating a long anticipated action on both sides.
As the darkness settled in the sky for the night, so did Chas and Dean.
Passions had been fuelled and re-ignited.
Hope u liked it after all this time!! please comment!!
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Post by missking on Mar 30, 2008 22:35:13 GMT 1
cool post more soon cant wait to see what happens next
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Post by tomsgirl on Mar 30, 2008 23:14:50 GMT 1
Fab please post more soon.
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Post by rtzen01 on Mar 31, 2008 16:43:08 GMT 1
great can't wait to read more, please post again soon |
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Post by rtzen01 on Apr 1, 2008 19:22:11 GMT 1
please post more soon |
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Post by Sapphira on Apr 1, 2008 21:21:36 GMT 1
just wonderin... i know i'm not good at updating but...
i'd like to play around with Dean's character a bit so i was thinking of doing a prequel to this fic when chas and dean were both teenagers after i finish this.
would anyone be interested in readin it?
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Post by Sapphira on Apr 1, 2008 21:27:16 GMT 1
lol heeee i forgot to say i'll have an update byyyy maybe tonight but deffo tomorrow
And thanx guys for your feedback it means alot to me when i read it and it really does encourage me to write!!
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Post by Sapphira on Apr 1, 2008 21:29:09 GMT 1
*starts chewing end of pen thinkin what to write*
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Post by Sapphira on Apr 1, 2008 21:32:21 GMT 1
Oh Vickyy?? i will ONLY write my next fic if you get updatin yours!!
*smiles evilly*
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Post by Sapphira on Apr 1, 2008 21:45:05 GMT 1
You'd better or i will have to get my power tools out...
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Post by Sapphira on Apr 1, 2008 22:16:37 GMT 1
Okey-dokey… this is the final update of this fic. Its short but… Awww…
I am dedicating this to every one who has stuck with it to the end, thankyou!! xx
Chas woke slowly. She was half lying on Dean, her face on his chest. She inhaled the scent of his after-shave and opened her eyes. She lifted her head slightly, sensing his gaze on her form.
“Morning Pix.”
“Morning Haggy.”
“Just like old times eh?”
She sighed softly.
“Just like old times.”
She traced a finger over his chest and spotted a tattoo. The engraving in his skin made her stare open-mouthed, in shock, horror and disbelief.
“Oi mate, what is this?”
He looked down at the point where she was staring at and his face turned the brightest scarlet that she had ever seen appear there.
“Well?”
“I… um… well…”
It was a beautiful picture of the Chas’s birth sign Sagittarius, but instead of an ugly man sprouting out of the horse’s body there was a beautiful woman with long, flowing black hair. It was an array of colour with flowery writing underneath, with the words:
‘Through the wind I hear your voice, in the clouds I see your name, living life without you Pix, just wouldn’t be the same.’
“Dean… When did you get this?”
“I… Just before you left. We’d had an argument… I wanted to prove how much you meant to me… I arrived at your house… and they said… they said… you’d… you’d gone.”
A tear slipped down his manly cheek.
“I… I’m sorry.”
*
Chas leant against the bridge where she had rescued Carl all those months ago. It pained her to think of him so innocent so unknowing. She didn’t know who loved more – Carl or Dean.
Dean. His tattoo had caused her to recall the past, her own world of darkness and light, and then she was lost, lost in a shadow of memories.
~ The End ~
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Post by missking on Apr 1, 2008 22:43:55 GMT 1
aww thats right good short and sweet i loved it well done on this story it was great cant wait to read the next one you do xx
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Post by maryg on Apr 1, 2008 23:01:41 GMT 1
well done , hope you enjoyed writing it as much as we enjoyed reading it. #smiley_B_09# #220108_17# #smiley_B_09#
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Post by xxxmeganxxx on Apr 1, 2008 23:14:28 GMT 1
Woop well done |
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Post by Sapphira on Apr 2, 2008 18:38:22 GMT 1
thankyou for all your comments everyone i know i said it bfore but it really does mean alot to me to see them.
i'm starting my next one tonight... dum dum durrrrrrrrrrr.......
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Post by rtzen01 on Apr 2, 2008 19:24:47 GMT 1
great ending, really enjoyed your story can't wait to read your new one |
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Post by tomsgirl on Apr 2, 2008 22:57:42 GMT 1
Fab update thank you for your brill story Sapphira I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
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Post by Sapphira on Apr 2, 2008 23:05:09 GMT 1
Heeee thanx guys
ive started ma new fic - check it out --- its called a strange sense of deja vu
Saph xx
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