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Post by missking on May 20, 2008 21:23:05 GMT 1
beaut updates sam someone do more please  |
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Post by eppsy on May 20, 2008 21:31:42 GMT 1
Am I really good writer? Want me to write more? I cna do bout another one tonight and some more tomorrow?
Call me Sam if you want, Eppsy is nickname. I might change it to Samuel Edward? What ya think?
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Post by rtzen01 on May 20, 2008 21:39:14 GMT 1
Hey sam, ye i think your quite a good writer  I would love you to write more i'm loving how this story is going just now |
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Rubies and Diamonds, Sapphires and Emeralds
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Post by Sapphira on May 20, 2008 22:21:01 GMT 1
Heyo! Love the style you've written it in, it's really good. Keep going Sam!!
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Post by maryg on May 20, 2008 23:14:49 GMT 1
Awwwwwwwwwwww sam your so romantic I hope you keep it up
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Post by eppsy on May 21, 2008 9:51:22 GMT 1
Thanks Mary. Didn't know I was romantic and thanks for the feedback, will do some more later, as revising for Biology GCSE at the moment.
Just an idea, but what would you other members think, if I started my own Thread/Stroy about The Dingles/The Kings/The Sugdens?
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Post by missking on May 21, 2008 15:44:19 GMT 1
i think you should go for it sam your a great writer x
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Post by eppsy on May 21, 2008 16:36:22 GMT 1
After a while of searching, she find Carl, staring down at a cup of cold coffee in his office.
Seeing Chas, Carl jolts his head up and orders Lexi out of the office, while he talks to Chas.
Lexi, being cocky, says:
"Sure, you don't want to make you any notes, so you don't forget anything Chas says?"
Carl stands up and puts his angry face on. Lexi knowing what his faces mean grabs her coat, runs out of the office and bumps straight into Miles.
Miles who has not had much "sexual" action since arriving in the village pulls her into a snog, as much shock to her. Lexi pulls away, and knees him in the balls before running off.
Back in the office, Carl and Chas had hardly started speaking, when they were ripping eah others clothes off and doing it on Carl's desk.
Just as soon as Chas was about to give Carl a ********, Miles walks in and his jaw drops.
Seeing Miles, Carl jumps too the side to cover up his nudity and drags Chas with him.
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Post by missking on May 21, 2008 16:54:01 GMT 1
hahaha thats funny LOL i love it do more soon please someone
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Post by missking on May 24, 2008 21:34:21 GMT 1
miles stands there speachless just staring at them not knowing what to say, when the door swings open and lexi bursts through it "i forgot my ..." she sees carl and chas stood there naked holding onto one another, you could see the anger building up inside her as she stands there starring at the two of them she hadnt even noticed miles stood there, chas just smiles at her and turns back to kiss carl who is glad he has got chas back and he smiles at lexi before kissing chas back
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Post by rtzen01 on May 24, 2008 21:50:44 GMT 1
this is great Please can someone post more |
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Post by eppsy on May 24, 2008 22:02:52 GMT 1
Wow, Really Good Charlie. Someone please post some more soon. ( It might be me, don't know. Depends on how busy I am.) Lol.
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Post by rtzen01 on May 25, 2008 14:57:51 GMT 1
please can someone post a bit more |
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Post by eppsy on May 25, 2008 15:03:56 GMT 1
Laughing to each other, Carl + Chas, kiss again, much to Lexi's annoyance.
Lexi, now starting to get really jealous, and you can tell from her face expression just blurts out:
"I'm not jealous, you morons, you see I'm going out with Miles."
Before Miles can give an answer back she pulls him in for a snog.
Now, Carl, is getting annoyed, as his office is not a sex brothel, yells at Lexi + Miles to take their business elsewhere, to which Lexi drags Miles out of the door.
Now back in hos office, and both him and Chas dressed, they sit down and have a serious talk.
Chas realises that she can't live without Carl, and Carl realises he can't live without Chas. But they both know they have to take small steps at a time.
Kissing Chas goodbye, as she has to go to work, at the pub, he says he will ring her tomorrow.
What they didn't realise is that Donald had seen them naked at it, and heard what Lexi and Miles said, and Chas + Carls private convo.
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Post by rtzen01 on May 25, 2008 15:46:12 GMT 1
haha, great loving this  Please can someone post more really really soon ;D |
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Post by missking on May 26, 2008 10:24:20 GMT 1
thats mint sam someone do more soon i wonder what wil hapen nx
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Post by eppsy on May 26, 2008 13:42:19 GMT 1
Just as Carl is about to ring someone, a client, Donald comes in and presses the button that cuts the call off.
Carl just looks up, and opens his mouth to say something, but just sits there looking like a goldfish.
Sensing something is wrong, he asks Donald, why he cut his call off.
Donald replies:
"I need a word with you."
"Ok . . . go on then, I'm busy if you can't see, so make it quick" replies Carl.
To this Donald calmly answered:
"Carl, keep your private life and love life at home in future, if I catch you again or have a tip off that you have done it again, you will be FIRED. Do you understand? I pay you to work not shag your missus. GET ME?"
Just one, plain, bland word comes out of Carl's mouth:
"Yes"
"Yes who?" says Donald getting angry.
"Yes Mr De Souza" comes Carl weak and feeble reply.
"Now get on with work, and you can work overtime to cover the time you wasted at lunch" shouted Donald, with red in his face.
"Ok" said Carl, in a wobbly voice, as if he was upset.
He picks the phone up and dials a number.
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Post by missking on May 26, 2008 13:53:11 GMT 1
aww poor carl haha lol its great someone do more please x
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Post by Jimmy Kings P.A. on May 26, 2008 15:35:58 GMT 1
I'll have a go....not sure if it'll be any good though!
The door opened and Chas came out, she saw Carl waiting for her. "I'm sorry about yesterday." She said awkwadly. " No honestly it's fine" he replied. "I should know better by now about punches from women!" They both chuckled.
------> It's short but sweet?........ Carry on! I love reading them!
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Post by rtzen01 on May 26, 2008 17:44:12 GMT 1
Fabby update loved Donald telling Carl off XD Please post more soon xx
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Post by Carl'sLittleAngel&HisP.A on May 29, 2008 14:35:21 GMT 1
Chas sat herself on Carls desk, “Did Donald say anything about seeing us?” Carl chuckled, “Yeah he did” Chas paused “Oh…Hope it weren’t to bad”, Carl sniggered “He had a word with me and told me if he was to catch us again I’d be fired”. Just as Chas was about to say something they heard someone coming in...
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Post by tomsgirl on May 29, 2008 18:48:54 GMT 1
Cool updates more please soon.
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Post by missking on May 29, 2008 20:29:54 GMT 1
thats great someone do more soon please
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Post by eppsy on May 31, 2008 0:17:34 GMT 1
Before that person could make it into the office, Chas had dived under Carl's desk and was pulling his legs towards her, so she would not be recognised.
Carl, picked up the phone, just as Donald came in.
Seeing Carl, was working Donald asked Carl:
"Would you like a cup of tea?"
Carl's reply was:
"Oh yes please I could drink for England at the moment."
Just as Donald went into the connecting room, Chas started to move her hands towards the top of Carl's legs. Carl was feeling horny now.
But because Donald was close to him he pushed Chas hands down and handed her a note at the same time.
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Post by missking on Jun 2, 2008 13:48:31 GMT 1
kwl wonder what they note said ?? great update someone post more soon
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 2, 2008 18:39:23 GMT 1
more soon please |
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Post by nicjroberts on Jun 12, 2008 17:27:11 GMT 1
love more
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Post by nicjroberts on Jun 13, 2008 20:48:47 GMT 1
please more
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Post by missking on Jun 13, 2008 20:53:49 GMT 1
ye post more soon please
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Post by eppsy on Jun 14, 2008 0:05:29 GMT 1
The note said:
"Stop ... please ... we can do this later, do you want me to get the sack?"
Chas knew this was a bit harsh, but understood, what Carl meant and just sat there with her legs crossed, listening to Carl tap away on the computer. She stared twiddling with her thumbs.
Then Donald came across, 2 inches from Chas's toes. Chas holds her breath. Carl gets all tense. Donald senses something is wrong. Eek.
"What's wrong Carl, you don't look well" says Donald.
"Just, a bit of a stomach ache, probablt dodgy coffee." replies Carl
"Oh, why not go home for the rest of the day, and come back refreshed tomorrow." continues Donald.
"Aww thanks. I think that is what I need." says Carl.
As of this Donald tells him to lock the office up as well, and he goes back to main house.
Phew. Chas knows she won't get caught now. They both make it out to Carl's car.
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I would love you to write more i'm loving how this story is going just now 
Please can someone post more really really soon 
