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Post by nicjroberts on Jun 25, 2008 17:40:57 GMT 1
more please
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 26, 2008 15:21:54 GMT 1
more soon Please  |
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Post by missking on Jun 26, 2008 15:33:13 GMT 1
post more really soon please
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Post by missking on Jul 2, 2008 21:07:07 GMT 1
post more soon please
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Post by eppsy on Jul 2, 2008 23:48:25 GMT 1
Please post the final installment. x
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Post by roch on Jul 5, 2008 16:56:35 GMT 1
Very very sorry for the massive delay (it's this life and PhD thing, it's so time consuming!). Anyway, we've reached the final curtain, so get ready for the last instalment of Embrace...
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Chas' resistance lasted only for a moment, before she allowed herself to be pulled back towards Carl. He held her close, and kissed her - at first gently, but with increasing passion. When their lips finally disengaged, he smiled at her, and she knew it was not condescending or making fun of her, but that he was just happy to be in her arms again.
Chas bit her lip, and looked up at Carl with wide eyes. Before she could think about it rationally, she took his hand and whispered, "My place."
Carl kissed her again, quickly, and nodded, gripping her hand tight and never wanting her to let go.
The next five or ten or fifteen minutes seemed to last forever as they stubmled towards the Dingle home, hand in hand, walking as fast as they could without breaking into a run. In both their hearts was the promise of a love to be reunited with itself - as though they had been holding on to two halves of something that should never have been separated.
"Can't we stop and do it here?" Carl exclaimed about halfway there. He was becoming stiff with the excitement, and could hardly bear to wait.
Chas giggled, unable to form a sentence - all she could think about was what would happen when they reached the house and gave in to their pent up passion. In place of words, she gripped Carl's hand all the tighter, and pulled him hard so that he had to follow her.
Finally, after what seemed like an age, they reached the Dingle homestead. Unable to contain himself, Carl stooped and picked Chas up, crashing through the door with her and into the main room of the house. To their relief it was empty, and so Carl stumbled towards the stairs, still holding Chas in his arms.
They made it up to an untidy bedroom, and were already undressing each other as Chas pushed the door shut behind them. Carl took her by the waist and swung her round so that she was kneeling on the bed opposite him, and they kissed, briefly, before returning to fumble with buttons and zips. Chas gasped as Carl rolled up her tight skirt with a firm hand, pulling down her knickers and forcing her back onto the bed.
Before they knew it, they were locked in coitus, with pieces of clothing still hanging off them. They writhed together, grasping and moaning, fulfilling every thought they had had about each other since they split up all those months ago. Chas was soon screaming with delight. There were many reasons why they had been so good together, and this was perhaps the most important - they understood each other sexually so well, knew how to bring the most heightened pleasure. When they had finished, Chas rolled Carl onto his back and they began again.
Some hours later - they did not know how long, as their time passed in a state of blissfully unaware ecstasy - they found themselves lying in each other's arms, limbs entangled and numb from the exertion.
For a while, they did not speak. But eventually, Chas turned towards Carl, grinning and about to tell him just how much she loved him - how she had never stopped, and she was prepared to forgive him for what he had done to her, and how she wanted to be with him forever. But when she saw Carl's face, she froze.
Carl's eyes were red, and tears were running down his cheeks. He could hardly bear to meet her eye. He loved her, so so much. He wanted nothing more than to be with her. But he suddenly realised how wrong her had been to let this happen.
This was what he had been guarding against all along. This was the reason why he had taken up with Lexi, to distract himself from his true love. Because he couldnot bear to love her any more. How could he love her without breaking her heart? Without telling her about the terrible thing he had done to his Dad? If he loved people, they got hurt.
And he had loved Chas that day, more than anything in the world - and now he had to hurt her. But the least he could do was to hurt her finally, and for the last time.
"I'm sorry," Carl whispered. "I can't... I just can't." With that he sprung from the bed, leaving her lying there, prone and naked.
Chas grabbed the sheet from the bed and pulled it over her, and started to shout. "Carl! What the hell are you doing? If you do this again..."
But Carl could not look at her. He threw on his clothes as quickly as he could, just enought o leave the house in a hurry. But before he left, he turned back to her, one last time. "I'm sorry," he said again. "But I don't love you, Chas." He had done his best to make it sound convincing, and now it was time to go.
Chas was suddenly left alone, stunned, in the bed where a few minutes ago she had been so happy. She had so much to say, so many tears to cry... But for now she was simply stunned. Her mind went back over that day. Her heart had been tugged this way and that, caught in embrace after embrace with the man she could not stop loving. But now it was just broken. And she would never, never let Carl back in to her life.
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Post by rtzen01 on Jul 5, 2008 17:12:32 GMT 1
OMG wasn't expecting that  that was really sad at the end, how could he do that  Well done roch that was fantastic.  Are you going to start a new story? |
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Post by eppsy on Jul 5, 2008 21:13:04 GMT 1
Wow, what a great edning. Please do another fan fiction, this one was great. x
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Post by missking on Jul 6, 2008 14:29:47 GMT 1
that was a great story i loved it poor chas feel sorry for her bles and poor carl he didnt want to hurt her its was great well done will you be doing another story  |
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Post by tomsgirl on Jul 18, 2008 1:29:11 GMT 1
WoW fab updates more stories soon please.
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Post by xxxmeganxxx on Jul 19, 2008 18:15:28 GMT 1
This story is so good! please update |
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Post by roch on Jul 21, 2008 17:50:53 GMT 1
Thank you so much everyone! You've said such lovely things and it really means a lot to me that people enjoyed it I'll definitely get on to some more stories when I can, though I really really need to finish my PhD chapter and write a conference paper and apply for jobs so might be a bit busy for the next month or two |
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that was really sad at the end, how could he do that 
