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Post by eppsy on May 21, 2008 16:47:52 GMT 1
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Introduction
This story goes back to when Scarlett and Daz, first started going out.
Chapter One/First Installment
Daz has just asked Scarlett out in front of Jimmy, and knowing what Jimmy would say Scarlett turns him down. Feeling embarrssed and rejected Daz just walks out without saying goodbye.
On his way home he walks into Debbie, who is crying.
He asks her:
"What's wrong?"
She replys:
"Oh nothing, just that prat Eli, he's gone and done another one of his crappy 'mastermind' criminal jobs, and now he is in the nick."
Hugging Debbie, Daz walks her home and makes her a nice hot cup of chocolate, with a marshmellow on the top. When Debbie sees the marshmellow, she lets out a gentle laugh.
Daz and Debbie talk for while, and then Daz says that it is about time he went home. Debbie, who did not want to spend the night alone, asked Daz if he could stay with the night.
He agrees, and sits down again, checking his mobile.
Seeing he has 3 Missed Calls and 5 New Messages, he goes to the toilet and reads them. Seeing they are from Scarlett he just deletes them, without thinking what they could be about.
The last text message Scarlett sent that Daz deleted said:
"Daz, I'm sorry I turned you down, but Jimmy was there and he would have gone balistic if I said 'Yes'."
"Please give me another chance?"
Daz goes downstairs and sees Debbie watching television. He goes and sits next to her and puts his arm over her shoulders.
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Post by missking on May 21, 2008 16:55:56 GMT 1
great start sam i love it post more soon please x
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Post by maryg on May 21, 2008 17:22:44 GMT 1
awwwwwwwwwwwwww your so romantic
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Post by eppsy on May 21, 2008 18:54:59 GMT 1
Am I? Want more?
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Post by missking on May 21, 2008 19:48:08 GMT 1
ye and ye more really soon please x
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Post by eppsy on May 23, 2008 12:22:48 GMT 1
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Chapter 2
Debbie, feeling down because of Eli, hugs up to Daz. After watching the film, Daz goes to get up when he realisies that Debbie has her hand on his thigh.
Thinking to himself calmly, he realises that Scarlett knocked him back , and he is a free man. Something clicks in his head and it keep saying:
"Go on, she interested in you, don't waste the only chance you may have, of having a passionate night."
That's when Daz asks Debbie:
"Do you fancy me?"
She replies:
"Course, I have done for ages now."
Hmm, Daz thinks and goes to give Debbie a kiss, not knowing if she will respond well or push him off and strom upstairs. He takes his chances and Debbie responds by pulling him in for a full blown snog.
Halfway through, he realises that he still likes Scarlett, and wants to try and patch things up so he pulls away from Debbie, and says that he has to go. Rushing out of the door, grabbing his new leather coat on the way, he runs to the bus shelter where he can be alone and think for a while.
Back at Debbie's, Debbie wonders what had just happened. She shurgs it off and goes to bed.
Daz, now sitting on his own, sheltered away for the torrents of rain coming from the sky, and the howling cold wind, he puts his coat on to keep himself warm, but realises, that he picked up Eli's coat and not his own. Annoyed at himself, he realises he can not go back to Debbie's now, cos he doesn't want to explain why he ran out, and also doesn't want to run into Debbie, as he wil feel embarrassed as he ran away from the chance of fun night.
After sitting there for over an hour, he texts Scarlett, explaining his feelings once again. He doesn't expect a reply straight away as it is 2am in the morning.
But a minute later, he hears a beep (message alert) on his phone. He reads the message and realises it is from Scarlett ...
It says:
"I didn't mean to turn you down.
Give me a chance to explain, cos I can.
I Love You Daz, never forget that.
Shall I meet you at the Café at 10 tomorrow morning?"
Daz, now with an estactic smile on his face, cos Scarlett wants him, just texts back:
"Yes, see you then."
He then walks back to Annie's Cottage, as he is staying there while Jo + Andy went on holiday for a month to Morroco.
He creeps in the door, hoping no-one heard him.
He was soo wrong to creep in at 2:30am.
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Post by maryg on May 23, 2008 13:58:02 GMT 1
oooooooooooooooooooo very good sam wounder why he was wrong
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Post by eppsy on May 23, 2008 14:12:22 GMT 1
I have a few ideas, gonna contemplate over a few before doing the next chapter.
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Post by missking on May 23, 2008 16:30:55 GMT 1
thats good sam i wonder wots guna happen post more really soon please sam x
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Post by eppsy on May 24, 2008 22:26:43 GMT 1
Some more for the dedicated readers that have left some wonderful comments about my writing ...
Daz is about to be sacrred for life because . . . as soon as he opened the door, he regretted it. Now he was mixed up in more mess and turmoil.
He saw Jack and Diane naked, going at it like rabbits on the sofa.
All he could say was:
"Oh My God, I Think I'm Going To Be Sick."
At once Jack jumped off Diane, and his jaw dropped as soon as he saw Daz.
Daz, was running for the door, as Jack was trying to stop he goning, but Jack had forgot he was naked, and nearly ran out the door after Daz, but luckily for him Diane shouted:
"Jack , your not wearing anything."
To this Jack replied:
"Oh shit, I forgot"
They both quickly got dressed and ran out looking for Daz.
They found him at the cricket pavillion, and had a long talk with him. He promised not to tell anyone what he saw, as long as he could borrow money when he wanted and do what he wants when he wants.
Jack and Diane had to agree, unless they wanted their sex life publitised around the village.
The next day ...
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Post by missking on May 24, 2008 22:28:50 GMT 1
haha thats well mint i love it sam do more soon please x
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Post by eppsy on May 26, 2008 13:19:11 GMT 1
A little more!
Daz had just woken up to find Diane standing over him, with a Full English and a nice warm Cup of Tea, but in a Tom + Jerry mug. Daz, he wondered why Diane was doing this, when it clicked what had happened the day before.
"Thanks Diane" he said "I'm have a feeling that I'm gonna get used to having breakfast in bed most mornings."
Diane realsied she would have to do that, otherwise Daz might spill the beans. And she didn't want that, cos Val would rib her forever more, and then she might have to kill herself.
Jack was downstairs, on the phone to Debbie, saying that he would Daz shifts today as he wasn't feeling well. Jack was also trying to please Daz by doing things for him.
Daz was sitting on the stairs, listening in suspense to what Jack was saying. A smile covered his face when he relaised he could laze around the hosue all day watching Jeremy Kyle. He loved that show.
A few hours later, on his own, Daz went upstairs, as Jeremy Kyle had finished started play GTA (Grand Theft Auto) on his playstation, when he phone beeped. It was a text message alert.
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Post by missking on May 26, 2008 13:33:06 GMT 1
wonder who the text is from
its great haha i love it
its funny to haha
post more soon please sam
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Post by eppsy on May 30, 2008 23:50:41 GMT 1
Some more.
Daz picked his phone up and flipped it open. He had 2 new messages. The first from Debbie and the second from Scarlett.
The one from Debbie said:
"Daz, I need to speak to you, meet me at the cafe at 12, or else."
The one from Scarlett said:
"Hiya Hun. Meet me at the cricket pavillion at 12, I have a suprise for you."
After reading both messages, Daz was in a weird state of mind, as he did not know which one he should go to.
He ponder over his choices while completing the next level of his PS2 game.
He wondered downstairs, put his trainers on, open the door and walked out.
He started walking.
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Post by missking on Jun 2, 2008 13:46:13 GMT 1
great update sam i wonder where he was goin and to which one post more soon please x
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Post by eppsy on Jun 6, 2008 15:08:38 GMT 1
Some more.He kept walking until he reached his destination. "Hey" he shouted out. There was no reply. It was unusual for this area to be quite. Where were they? 'Hmm' thought Daz. He walked a little further closer and realise a door was open. He entered. He couldn't believe what he saw.  He gulped and shut the door. .....
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Post by missking on Jun 6, 2008 18:44:34 GMT 1
thats well good sam i love it wonder what he saw and where he went post more soon please x
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Post by missking on Jun 25, 2008 16:22:20 GMT 1
post more soon please sam your a great writer
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Post by missking on Jul 2, 2008 21:05:42 GMT 1
post more soon please sam
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Post by eppsy on Jul 2, 2008 23:46:12 GMT 1
Nah, I'm not going to continue with this story. Sorrrry. I think I will foucs of the C+C one.
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Post by missking on Jul 3, 2008 10:07:05 GMT 1
Oh ok then sam, if you ever think about writing this one again though it would be great
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