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Post by chas on Jun 3, 2008 4:00:01 GMT 1
It's the week after Carl had found out about Lexi betraying him.
In the cafe:
Carl was sat nursing a cup of coffee, when Chas walked in.
Chas: What's up with you? You look like you've lost a pound and found a penny
Carl: Haven't you heard? You were right
Chas: Course I was, I always am (with a smile on her face), right about what?
Carl: Matt and Lexi
Chas: I'm sorry, I really am, what ever's happened between us, I still care about you, I don't want to see you hurt, I really don't
Carl: (forcing a smile) Thanks, I better go, we've got alot on at Holdgate and Donalds away for the next fortnight
Chas: Bye then (as she ordered two coffees, off Jamie, just as Paddy walked in)
Paddy: You alright
Chas: Yeah, (lost in thought) there's something I want to ask you
This is my first fan-fic, what do you all think?
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 3, 2008 7:25:21 GMT 1
aww that was nice, great start Please post more soon
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Post by maryg on Jun 3, 2008 16:07:47 GMT 1
awwwwwwwwww great carry on
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Post by missking on Jun 3, 2008 17:45:41 GMT 1
its great do more soon please
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Post by Carl'sLittleAngel&HisP.A on Jun 3, 2008 23:21:09 GMT 1
Awww great fan fic! Please add more
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Post by eppsy on Jun 4, 2008 11:08:47 GMT 1
Good story. Please post some more soon. x
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Post by chas on Jun 4, 2008 14:32:50 GMT 1
Thanks for all your comments, I'll post some more tonight.
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Post by missking on Jun 4, 2008 16:35:14 GMT 1
kwl shall look forward to it
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 4, 2008 16:43:46 GMT 1
great cant wait
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Post by chas on Jun 5, 2008 8:04:28 GMT 1
At Holdgate farm:
Carl was under a mountain of paperwork, when Chas walked in.
Chas: Hi
Carl: (looking up and quite bemused) What you doing here?
Chas: I've come to help, I've spoken to Paddy, the vets is pretty quiet at the moment, so I can combine working here with the vets
Carl: Why would you want to do that? I'm grateful, but, why?
Chas: Speaking to you earlier in the cafe you sounded stressed and like I said I still care and with Lexi gone and Donald away, you sounded like you needed some help, so here I am
Carl: You sure?
Chas: Yes, now what do you want me to do (as she scanned Carls desk, not waiting for a answer), I'll start by making headway with this paperwork and get it in some sort of order
Carl: Thanks
Chas: Your welcome
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 5, 2008 18:04:35 GMT 1
Great update, really liking this so far Please post more soon
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Post by missking on Jun 5, 2008 18:04:44 GMT 1
thats great more soon please x
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Post by tomsgirl on Jun 5, 2008 20:54:49 GMT 1
Well Chas well done for your first story it was great more please x
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Post by nicjroberts on Jun 12, 2008 17:26:30 GMT 1
love more
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Post by nicjroberts on Jun 13, 2008 20:50:05 GMT 1
please more
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Post by missking on Jun 13, 2008 20:55:18 GMT 1
post more soon please x
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Post by eppsy on Jun 14, 2008 0:07:19 GMT 1
Cool update. More soon please. x
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Post by nicjroberts on Jun 25, 2008 17:39:25 GMT 1
more please
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 26, 2008 21:06:40 GMT 1
more soon please =]
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Post by missking on Jun 26, 2008 21:29:42 GMT 1
post more soon please
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