Post by jamie on Dec 31, 2004 17:10:47 GMT 1
Note : I like to use a vast amount of drama and my stories are very explosive and have a lot of cliffhangers.
This is the first of a few stories I have thought of. This one is looking at the dramatic exit of Charity King, formerly Tate. Tom and Charity are married, after one heck of a wedding day in which Sadie tried to wreck.
In the offices. Tom strolls in. He sees Sadie, ignores her and slams the door of the office. Sadie enters.
Sadie : How long are you going to keep up this charade?
Tom : ... as long as it takes for you to realise that Charity isn't the woman you think she is. I admit - she's a flirt, I get jealous. But that's who she is ... and it's why I love her.
Sadie : Oh stop living in your dream world, Tom! She's going to fleece you for everything you're worth.
Tom : I'd like you to leave please.
Sadie : Tom, please. Listen to me.
Tom : Go!
Tom lowers his head into his work as Sadie walks out worried for her father-in-law.
Jimmy : Sadie, what's the matter?
Sadie : Oh, Jimmy. Your father is a fool. He can't see what a manipulative, (Charity enters behind Sadie) scheming bitch Charity really is.
Sadie turns around and looks intently into Charity's eyes. Tom walks out of the office.
Tom : What's going on?
Charity : Sadie was just informing Jimmy of how much of a ... what was it? Manipulative, scheming bitch I am.
Sadie turns to Jimmy. She then looks at Tom.
Sadie : I think it's crunchtime. Me, your husband's wife ... or her - the woman that plans to take you for all you've got.
Tom : Get out.
Sadie : What?
Tom : I won't hear another bad word about Charity under this roof, or under any roof that is. You've gone too far this time, Sadie. Now leave.
Sadie grabs her coat and storms out of the offices.
Jimmy : Dad, please.
Tom : You too.
Jimmy : You'll regret this. You'll soon realise what a poisonous little snake she really is.
Jimmy stares at Charity and walks after Sadie. A tear rolls down Charity's eyes.
Tom : Come here!
Tom gives Charity a comforting hug as the tears rapidly release.
Charity : What the hell have I ever done to them?
Tom : Ignore them. Just because they've got marital problems they think it's OK to have partners in the subject. You're better than them.
Charity : I just feel like I'm coming between you and your family. First Sadie and Jimmy, Matthew and Carl will turn on me next.
Tom : It's me and you now. If they want to be part of it, they have to stop this nonsense.
Sadie stroppily walks off towards the Corner shop. Jimmy chases her.
Jimmy : Sadie, wait!
Sadie turning around to Jimmy : Why does he believe that evil cow over me? I'm his daughter-in-law. He's known me for years.
Jimmy : He's going through a stage of denial. He'll realise what she's like.
Sadie : Why are you making excuses for him?
Jimmy : I'm not. Sadie, I've just got her a poisonous snake in front of my dad. He told me to get out. I've done this because I'm behind you ... all the way.
Sadie : Do you really mean that?
Jimmy : Of course ... why?
Sadie : I have a little plan on how we can get the newly-titled Mrs King off the agenda.
Jimmy : We've tried to get rid of her once.
Sadie : That was just a practice-run. This time ... it's going to get dramatic.
This is the first of a few stories I have thought of. This one is looking at the dramatic exit of Charity King, formerly Tate. Tom and Charity are married, after one heck of a wedding day in which Sadie tried to wreck.
In the offices. Tom strolls in. He sees Sadie, ignores her and slams the door of the office. Sadie enters.
Sadie : How long are you going to keep up this charade?
Tom : ... as long as it takes for you to realise that Charity isn't the woman you think she is. I admit - she's a flirt, I get jealous. But that's who she is ... and it's why I love her.
Sadie : Oh stop living in your dream world, Tom! She's going to fleece you for everything you're worth.
Tom : I'd like you to leave please.
Sadie : Tom, please. Listen to me.
Tom : Go!
Tom lowers his head into his work as Sadie walks out worried for her father-in-law.
Jimmy : Sadie, what's the matter?
Sadie : Oh, Jimmy. Your father is a fool. He can't see what a manipulative, (Charity enters behind Sadie) scheming bitch Charity really is.
Sadie turns around and looks intently into Charity's eyes. Tom walks out of the office.
Tom : What's going on?
Charity : Sadie was just informing Jimmy of how much of a ... what was it? Manipulative, scheming bitch I am.
Sadie turns to Jimmy. She then looks at Tom.
Sadie : I think it's crunchtime. Me, your husband's wife ... or her - the woman that plans to take you for all you've got.
Tom : Get out.
Sadie : What?
Tom : I won't hear another bad word about Charity under this roof, or under any roof that is. You've gone too far this time, Sadie. Now leave.
Sadie grabs her coat and storms out of the offices.
Jimmy : Dad, please.
Tom : You too.
Jimmy : You'll regret this. You'll soon realise what a poisonous little snake she really is.
Jimmy stares at Charity and walks after Sadie. A tear rolls down Charity's eyes.
Tom : Come here!
Tom gives Charity a comforting hug as the tears rapidly release.
Charity : What the hell have I ever done to them?
Tom : Ignore them. Just because they've got marital problems they think it's OK to have partners in the subject. You're better than them.
Charity : I just feel like I'm coming between you and your family. First Sadie and Jimmy, Matthew and Carl will turn on me next.
Tom : It's me and you now. If they want to be part of it, they have to stop this nonsense.
Sadie stroppily walks off towards the Corner shop. Jimmy chases her.
Jimmy : Sadie, wait!
Sadie turning around to Jimmy : Why does he believe that evil cow over me? I'm his daughter-in-law. He's known me for years.
Jimmy : He's going through a stage of denial. He'll realise what she's like.
Sadie : Why are you making excuses for him?
Jimmy : I'm not. Sadie, I've just got her a poisonous snake in front of my dad. He told me to get out. I've done this because I'm behind you ... all the way.
Sadie : Do you really mean that?
Jimmy : Of course ... why?
Sadie : I have a little plan on how we can get the newly-titled Mrs King off the agenda.
Jimmy : We've tried to get rid of her once.
Sadie : That was just a practice-run. This time ... it's going to get dramatic.
I like it so far! Do I sense that poor Charity is going to have a hitman after her shortly? 