hillvk
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Post by hillvk on Mar 25, 2007 21:51:42 GMT 1
I'm interested to read more ...
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Post by hillvk on Mar 26, 2007 21:20:37 GMT 1
Hey, liked the update. It's going well. If i was going to offer a teeny bit of advice I would say that you don't really need the ... all the time;  it flows well without them. Also starting another line when a new person speaks? But maybe that's just being picky. Anyway i really like it. |
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Post by hillvk on Mar 27, 2007 0:01:47 GMT 1
Yes, definitely. I like the way the paegant ties it in with what's currently happening ...
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Post by hillvk on Mar 27, 2007 16:58:45 GMT 1
Who is the mystery guest???!!! Really good look forward to more. Set out well as well!
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Post by rtzen01 on Apr 11, 2007 13:45:05 GMT 1
please post
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it flows well without them. Also starting another line when a new person speaks? But maybe that's just being picky. Anyway i really like it.