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Post by carlsbabe on May 29, 2007 21:44:02 GMT 1
Im a bit addicted to writing stories right now,please excuse the bad quality!I have posted this on a few other sites as well.
So, my story is set a bit in the future, only a few months maybe. Carl is Tom’s killer. But Rosemary and Grayson have gone down for it.MUAHAHAHAHA!!!*Coughs*Sorry about that. But anyways, Jimmy and Kelly have finally wed, and Carl and Chas are still going out, albeit a bit rockily.So, sit back, get you a cuppa, and enjoy!
Carl stared out the kitchen window at Home Farm, after Chas had stormed out after yet another argument. He was getting sick of this. He put his half empty cup of coffee down on the counter. He thought back to the happy days with her. He remembered the time he overcame his vertigo so she could see how much he loved her. Then, of course, one of the main reasons his father was gone was because of her. If he hadn’t lost his head so quickly, he might still be here. But then, so would Rosemary and Grayson. He shook his head of the thoughts, but they still clung to him, like rain clinging to his skin, as he stepped out into the rainy night to clear his head. He thought about his brothers. Jimmy was in Madrid, on his final leg of his worldwide honeymoon. Matthew was God knows where, he hadn’t looked him in the eye since the truth came out. Max was, well, with his father and mother, up there. Carl raised his eyes skywards. He shivered as a cold breeze hit him. He went inside. He closed the side door behind him, and locked it.
“I don’t believe the git!”Chas fumed, storming into the kitchen of the Dingle family household, throwing her bag onto the table. She flicked her soaked hair over her shoulder. “Carl?” enquires Lisa, combing Belle’s hair. “Bathroom free?” Chas didn’t wait for an answer as she sped upstairs, longing for a relaxing, hot bath. Belle turned around to look knowingly at her mum. Lisa laughed at the maturity of her daughter, and turned her back to face Shadrach watching some programme on the television to finish her hair.
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Dingle Pig Oink Oink
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Post by jude on May 30, 2007 12:17:18 GMT 1
Really good, please write more soon. By the way you said that you have posted this on some site, I am really interested in finding some good Emmerdale fanfiction site. Could you let me know where they are.
I would be very grateful
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Post by rtzen01 on May 30, 2007 16:04:41 GMT 1
Thanks Carlsbabe yet another good story from you please post more
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 3, 2007 11:25:24 GMT 1
Chas stayed in bed the next morning.It was a Sunday morning,and her shift at the Woolie started at six that evening.She lay on her bed,thinking.She wasn't tired,but she couldn't bring herself to get up either.She closed her eyes and was just trying to drift off when she heard a shriek from downstairs.She sat up,listening hard."YOU'RE HOME!!" she could hear Lisa yell from downstairs.Chas got up quickly,and threw on her dressing gown.She pounded down the stairs to see what was up.
Carl was up early that morning.He wanted to go visit his parents grave,and Max's as well.He didnt want his brothers to come.They were wary around him,he could feel it.Every time he went out alone,they started ringing him and looking for him.He knew they were just worried about him,but still.He wanted to be on his own for a while.He threw on his jacket and,bracing himself for the cold that was about to hit him,left.
Chas stood frozen at the bottom of the stairs,staring at the figure inside the door."Del?"she whispered.The figure threw back their hood,and Del smiled up at Chas."Chas!"she ran to her,and threw her arms around her."Did ya miss me?"Chas pulled her off her,and stood back,looking her up and down."You've got a gorgeous tan!"she grinned.Del laughed."I KNOW!The weather is FABULOUS over in Peru.Full of sexy men,too!" The two cousins laughed.Lisa was busying herself over near the stove."A fry,yes?" "Yeah!"cried Del."I haven't had one in ages!"she sat down at the table,waiting for the rest of the family to rise.
The wind blew hard into Carl's face.It didn't sway him.He still stood there,staring at the three headstones.He bent down and began to read the inscriptions.His eyes were following the words,but he was lost in his own thoughts."CARL!" Carl stood up quickly,brushing off a tear that had fallen.He turned around to see Jimmy,making his way over to him,through all the headstones."What?" "What are you doing here?We woke up and you were gone!" "Oh,I am sorry.I will be back for the roll call in future"said Carl sarcastically.Jimmy looked at him."Theres no need to be like that,Carl.We're just worried about you,thats all." "Well,don't be."Carl said flatly,before turning back to the graves.Jimmy stepped up beside his brother,staring down at his father's headstone.He put his arm around Carl's shoulder."He wouldn't have wanted this,you know.He would have wanted you to get over this.And me,and Matt,can help you get over it." "Just leave me alone!"Carl cried,shrugging off his brothers grip.He turned away and began to run,through all the headstones,running away from Jimmy,away from the headstones,away from his own thoughts.
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Post by chasdinglefan on Jun 3, 2007 12:17:59 GMT 1
This is a great story. Please post more soon, with Carl and Chas scenes please!!!!
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 3, 2007 13:07:33 GMT 1
Yes i agree that was great please post more soon, with lots of carl and chas scenecs luv chas dingle xx
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 9, 2007 17:04:42 GMT 1
Please post more with lots of Carl and Chas scenes luv chas dingle xxx
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Post by chasdinglefan on Jun 13, 2007 0:57:57 GMT 1
please post more!!!
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 18, 2007 14:33:33 GMT 1
Carl stalked through the village.He needed to find somewhere quiet,to be on his own.But first he needed to stop at a little place.He arrived outside the shop.He entered,and headed straight for the alcohol shelves.
Viv stared at him. "Bit early,isn't it?" she murmered to Emily,who was working the till beside her.
Emily looked up at the tall man with his back turned to them. "Each to his own." she said patiently,before returning to the next customer.
Carl reached up to the top shelf,and took down a bottle of clear vodlka.He walked over to the queue and joined it.
Viv peered at him from where she was stacking the daily newspapers.She was trying to think why he looked so rough,before a customer distracted her.
When Carl reached the top of the queue,he plonked the bottled down on the table beside the till and fumbled in his wallet looking for some change.
"Morning,Mr.King.Breezy,isn't it?" Emily made idle chat as she scanned the bottle,trying not to think what person needed drink so early in the morning.She excluded Shadrach.
"Morning.Mmmm,it is." replied Carl,not really concentrating on the conversation.
"Yes.Well,that will be £5.90 please,Mr.King."
Carl pulled his wallet apart trying to find some coins.He only had notes.
"Here," he said as he flung a tenner note onto Emily's outstretched palm."Keep the change."
He picked up the bottle,and,hugging his jacket close around him to protect himslef against the cold,left,leaving everyone in the shop staring after him.
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Post by chasdinglefan on Jun 18, 2007 16:09:01 GMT 1
please post more
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Post by cielbr on Jun 18, 2007 16:23:32 GMT 1
Hi, I really like this story. poor Carl. More soon please
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 18, 2007 20:26:49 GMT 1
"Mmmmm,that was lovely Lisa.Thanks." said Del,pushing away her almost-licked-clean plate.
"No problem,love.Good to have you home!" replied Lisa,pouring some more tea into her own mug.
"Ye,ta Lisa.Just gotta pop to the shop.A bit low on credit." said Eli,standing up and bringing his plate over to the sink.
Belle jumped up from the table and ran to her room,without warning,leaving Lisa and Zak staring bemused after her.
"Might join you there,Eli." chimed in Del,standing up as well."See you in a bit."
The two Dingles left together.
Belle came back with her purse in her hand."Oh,are they gone?" she frowned,sliding her purse into the pocket of her dressing gown."I wanted some Fruit Pastilles."
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Carrie bent her head against the bitter wind.Bad weather for July.She had been hoping she could get a tan.Up ahead she could see Carl leaving the shop,with something bundled under his arm.She began to jog to catch up with him.
"Hey!How are you feeling,Carl?" she asked softly,placing her hand on his arm.
He looked at her,but his stare seemed to go right through her. "Why do you want to know,Carrie?Too see whether maybe I killed my mother?Or maybe Max,lets not forget Max!”
"No,nothing like that!Carl,honestly-"
"Get off!" Carl snapped gruffly.He began to shake his arm in an attempt to get her hand removed from his arm.She stuck like glue.He began to curse,trying to prise her arm away like a toddler who didn't want a hug.Carrie herself didn't know why she was holding on,she felt as if she let go,Carl would lose his grip too.She started to try and talk sense into him,but she herself couldn't make any sense of what she was saying.Carl stopped struggling for a minute.He gazed into her eyes,and leaned in....
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 18, 2007 20:27:24 GMT 1
Anyone think they know whats gonna happen next??
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 18, 2007 20:34:39 GMT 1
Carrie looked into his eyes,not sure of what was happening.Before she could even think of the consequences of if she kissed him,he began to talk in a cold manner.
"Stay away from me,Carrie Nicholls.I mean it.We have no history,you made that clear.And I'm going to make sure I have no future with you.I told you to get out,while you could.But,of course,you stuck your big nose in it,didn't you?It a bit of gossip for all your friends,our family business,isn't it?" He spuun away from her.
"Carl,I am geniunly worried about you,you know that,and I would never consider your personal life as gossip-"
"Then stay out of it!"
"Carl,I-"
"I SAID STAY OUT OF IT!" Carl gave her a hard shove which sent her tumbling backwards.He stared at her for a few moments,eyes blazing,before turning on his heel and striding away.
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Post by porlock2000 on Jun 18, 2007 22:10:39 GMT 1
Fantastic! Can we have some more?
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 19, 2007 20:20:23 GMT 1
"Yeah,loads of birds Eli......" said Del sarcastically,rolling her eyes.
"Ah,excellent,we'll visit you sometime then!" Eli grinned,imagining a tanned-self lying on the beach,surrounded by loads of beautiful girls in minature bikinis.
"Is that-Carl?" Del stopped suddenly in her tracks,staring up ahead at the figure pushing over a woman and beginning to storm towards them.
"Blimey-it is!And Carrie!Whats he doing,knocking women around?Thats a crime these times,it is and all!"
Del rolled her eyes again."You'd swear you were a symbol of the law Eli luv" she snapped as she began to walk again,towards Carrie who was staring after Carl in shock.
"Me?ME?I'm-I-I never-Del,wait!"
Carl walked even closer,seeming not to notice Del,who was staring at him as she came closer and closer. When they passed,for a second that seemed like an eternity,Carl looked up,into Del's eyes,and she could see something she had never noticed before.But before she could figure out what it was,the moment passed,Carl was gone,and Del was left alone.
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Post by chasdinglefan on Jun 19, 2007 21:24:58 GMT 1
great!!! post more soon!!!
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 26, 2007 18:24:40 GMT 1
Please post more both your stories are great, xxxx
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 26, 2007 22:06:16 GMT 1
Del scurried over to Carrie."You alright?"she asked her as she hauled her to her feet.
"Yeah,"said Carrie,sweeping her hair out of her eyes as she stared after Carl."I don't know what came over him.He's never usually like this."
"I know," agreed Del,bending down and retrieving Carrie's handbag.
Carrie raised her eyesbrows."Ex?"she questioned.
Del stood up straight."Yeah,you could say that."
"Well,thanks Del,talk to you soon.Take care of yourself."
"Same to you"said Del,as Eli caught up with her.
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Post by chasdinglefan on Jun 26, 2007 23:14:26 GMT 1
post more soon please, with some Chas and Carl scenes!!!
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 27, 2007 17:40:54 GMT 1
Please post more with lots of Carl and Chas xxx
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Post by rtzen01 on Oct 28, 2007 15:18:49 GMT 1
please post more soon i loved this story
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