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Post by missking on Jul 1, 2008 16:38:49 GMT 1
awww glad hes ok .. and hes talkin to chas
i love it
post more really soon please
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Post by eppsy on Jul 1, 2008 20:05:33 GMT 1
Aww how sweet.
Great Update.
More soon please. x
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Post by xxxmeganxxx on Jul 2, 2008 14:10:29 GMT 1
'Oh Carl' Chas whispered, and she leaned in and kissed him softly, as she pulled away she smiled, 'I love you, and thats the bottom line for me' she said.
A few minutes later Jimmy, Matt and Scarlett entered the room. As they walked in they saw Carl and Chas holding hands, 'so its back on then!' Scarlett said excitedly, 'yeah all thanks to you mrs' Carl replied, 'I dont know what I would have done if you hadnt have gone after her', 'what are sisters for' Scarlett smiled and sat next to her brother. Jimmy and Matt were standing by the door, Carl knew that his brothers and Chas had never got on, especially her and Matthew, 'Look Matt, I know you and Chas havnt always seen eye to eye but..' Matt butted in, 'Carl you dont have to say anything, Me and Chas are fine, we have talked, and she knows I just want whats best for you, and she promised me she would do that', Matt winked at Chas and she smiled back at him, 'This is well weird' Scarlett said, 'everyones getting on, this is so not King like!' They all began to laugh, 'well i just wish it hadnt taken something as bad as this to make us all see whats really important' Jimmy said, 'Yeah' Matt agreed, ' and from now on we are all gonna look to the future, forget the past, thats done, we've gotta look forward now'. 'Ah stop it Matt your gonna make us cry' Carl laughed, 'but seriously yeah, this is our new beginning, Ive got everything I could want around me, two amazing brothers, a brilliant sister and a fantastic girlfriend, who i'm not gonna let go of again, coz guys, this is the one', 'Now whos trying to make people cry!' Matt laughed. Carl smiled, and looked at Chas and leaned in close to her, 'the one' he whispered, and she smiled back, 'the one' she replied.
The End!
Hope you all liked it!
Im thinking about starting a new story soon, thats if you thought this one was good lol!
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Post by eppsy on Jul 2, 2008 14:16:35 GMT 1
Aww, that was a great ending Megan. I love your story. Soo sweet to see a happy ending.
Ooh please do start a new fan fiction, I enjoyed reading this one, so I'm, bound to enjoy reading a new one if you decided to write one. x
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Post by missking on Jul 2, 2008 16:36:47 GMT 1
that was amazin
so sweet
i loved that story it was read good
well done glad it was a happy ending
i hope you do start another one your a great writer
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Post by rtzen01 on Jul 3, 2008 14:20:11 GMT 1
amazing  That was so sweet Well done megan that was a brill story and your new one is great to  |
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Post by tomsgirl on Jul 18, 2008 0:42:12 GMT 1
WoW what a fab ending thanx Megan I loved catching up with it.
I will be looking forward to reading your new one.
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