|
Post by tomsgirl on Feb 17, 2008 3:09:07 GMT 1
I started Trouble in paradise but shall I finish it what does everyone think? I was going to change certain parts of it to make it exciting ? It is my first fan fic. Any ideas or questions are welcome.
Thanks Tomsgirl x
|
|
|
Post by maryg on Feb 17, 2008 3:21:12 GMT 1
no dont finish it its a soap carry on you light weight ive been going for 9 pages come on I want competition
|
|
|
Post by tomsgirl on Feb 17, 2008 3:27:00 GMT 1
Ok Mary I will thanks I was just put off as a lot of people start them including me & never finish them but I will try even with starting my nvq & working a 40 hour week etc. Hopefully I give you some competition lol!
|
|
|
Post by maryg on Feb 17, 2008 3:34:07 GMT 1
Yeah thanks , but put your nvq first never mind me , just postonce a week if it gets you down , i never posted 4 about 2 weeks as one of my kids was ill , she came first . by the way your doing good
|
|
|
Post by rtzen01 on Feb 17, 2008 9:27:40 GMT 1
Ye i would love you to finish it, although i was a bit confused by how was going out with who and who everyone was ? , but it was good
|
|
|
Post by tomsgirl on Feb 17, 2008 23:28:06 GMT 1
Well thank you for the comments I will look through it then sort it out then change it etc then post more.
|
|