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Post by missking on May 24, 2008 22:21:40 GMT 1
this is my story let me no what you think of it and whether i should carry on or not
it starts with when carl and lexi are seeing each other
Carl was sat in his office reading through a contract that miles had given him when lexi walked in a sat down on the table in front of him, hey, carl said in a not so pleased voice, whats up with you lexi asked nowt I have just got to much to do today and I dont need you here interfering that’s all why don’t you go see if miles has got something for you to do. Lexi walks out of carls office and through into where miles was making tea, hey miles do you fancy going to the pub for a drink carls in a right mood today it must be that time of the month for him again he has been so stroppy and jumpy all week, I have noticed that to lexi he is being so secretive he is up to something he best no be planning another fight with matthew or sumthing, miles agreed to go to the pub with lexi and he went to tell carl that they was going, as miles walked into carls office carl jumped and hide something in this draw, me and lexi are off to the pub get out of your way for abit ok see ya in abit ring me if you need anything ok, carl waited untill he heard miles start the car up and he picked his phone up out of the draw and read the text that had come through
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Post by rtzen01 on May 24, 2008 22:27:07 GMT 1
ooo, wonder what he was hiding Please carry on, could be the start of a good story. Please post more, soon hopefully
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Post by eppsy on May 24, 2008 22:31:08 GMT 1
Wow, a cliffhanger. That was great Charli, I liked it. More soon please? I wonder what he hding. A text from Chas? Looking forward to next installment to find out.
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Post by maryg on May 24, 2008 22:32:27 GMT 1
awwwwwwwwwww its nice charli keep going .
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Post by eppsy on May 24, 2008 22:33:19 GMT 1
See, I told you your writing is not bad, Charli. ;D
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Post by missking on May 24, 2008 22:49:53 GMT 1
thanks everyone for all your great comments i have done abit more let me no what you think
Carl read the text and chuckled to himself at what it said he replied to the text and put his phone back in his draw where no-one could get to it. At the pub lexi and miles where having a bitch about how jumpy carl had been over the last week and they wondered what he was up to, lexi when over to the bar to order some more drinks, chas was serving them when her phone started ringing, are you ment to have that on at work lexi said to her with a nasty tone, o get lost lexi do you want to drink this drink or wear it, lexi gave her the dead eye and picked hers and miles drinks up and walked back to where he was sitting. Chas looked at her phone she had a text when the name came up on the screen a huge smile appeared on her face she went into the backroom of the pub where she could read the text in private without someone interrupting her. Miles was getting abit bored of having to talk to lexi so he finished his drink off and told her he had to go back to work and that she could have the rest of the day off work because he was feed up of her. Back in the office carl was texting away to a mystery girl and having a good laugh to himself.
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Post by eppsy on May 24, 2008 22:55:54 GMT 1
Wow, that is good. It says it might be Chas, but not defo. How interesing this is turning out to be. This is a great story Charlie. Keep Going.
More Soon Please.
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Post by maryg on May 24, 2008 22:56:10 GMT 1
its great keep going its fab.
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Post by rtzen01 on May 24, 2008 23:20:10 GMT 1
Fabby, really good charlie Cant wait for more xx
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Post by missking on May 24, 2008 23:24:44 GMT 1
[glow=red,2,300]thanks for all the lovely comments people i will try to add more 2moz when i get back from wembly if not i wil have more on monday for you hope you enjoy it x[/glow]
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Post by eppsy on May 24, 2008 23:28:44 GMT 1
Wow how you get your tect like that Charlie?
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Post by missking on May 24, 2008 23:34:05 GMT 1
[glow=red,2,300]selet your writing them click on the green G [/glow]
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Post by eppsy on May 24, 2008 23:46:28 GMT 1
[glow=red,2,300]Ok thanks Charlie.[/glow]
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Post by footy on May 25, 2008 0:56:14 GMT 1
yeah I like it
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Post by rtzen01 on May 26, 2008 10:50:57 GMT 1
Hey Charlie Please post more soon
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Post by missking on May 26, 2008 11:36:28 GMT 1
thanks for all your comments hope you enjoy
Carls phone rang again and the text message said “ carl meet me at r pub in hotten in 1hour love u x” carl was just replying to the text when miles came walking into the office, carl jumped up having not heard his car pulling in and he dropped his phone on the floor, miles picked the phone up off the floor before carl could get down to pick it up, oi give me that that’s mine, miles read the message reply on the phone whos the unlucky lady your going to see than - Does lexi no - is this why you have been so jumpy all week - cmon carl tell me, carls was getting angry, just give me my phone back will you, miles sensed that carl was getting angry and handed him his phone back and walked through the door to make a cup of tea, carl do you want a cup of tea while I have the kettle on, carl didn’t answer him he was just sat starring out of the window, miles decided just to make him one anyway and walked back through to the office with the tea and handed carl his and he went a sat down at his desk carl walked back to his desk and sat down, there was silents for a couple of minutes, then miles said carl mate I no we haven’t always see eye to eye but this week you have been all stropey and jumpy come on tell me whats going on cos I cant work with you like this any more, carl just starred down at his cup of tea then after a minute or two he said soz mate, can you do me a favour please miles, ok then if I must what is it carl, will you take lexi somewhere for me just not into hotten please I need her out of the way, carl I have had enough of that women for one day I don’t know who you can go out with her, ye well if all goes well tonight I want be any more come miles I will pay you. Miles agree not understanding what carl had ment by if all went well tonight she miles had take lexi out for the night to keep her out of the way of carl and his mystory women. Carl went home to get ready, he put on his jeans and green top that he new his mystery lady loved him in.
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Later at the pub in hotten
Carl walked in he had already had a text saying she was there waiting for him. He stood at the door and glanced around the pub trying to spot who he had come to meet but the pub was full and it was hard to see people, then at the bar he saw her, she had long blonde hair and she was chatting away to the barman, that’s her carl thought to himself, there she was wanting to meet up with him again after everything he had done and said ….
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Post by rtzen01 on May 26, 2008 11:48:30 GMT 1
ooo wonder who she is :S This is great Charlie Can't wait for more xx
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Post by missking on May 26, 2008 11:56:12 GMT 1
thanks rebekah i will do some more tonight after we have celebrate with rovers
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Post by eppsy on May 26, 2008 13:09:09 GMT 1
That's great.
So it is not Chas. Louise? :S
Another cliffhanger. Can't wait for more. Please post some more soon.
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Post by missking on May 26, 2008 19:46:11 GMT 1
i have done abit more let me know what you think of it and thanks for all the lovely comments
Back in emmerdale village
Miles was sat in his office waiting for lexi to come in he hadn’t told her he was taking her out. He was sat sliding his phone up and down bored out of his head, the door crashed open and lexi walked in, where’s carl, I am afraid that carl isn’t here he’s gone out on a business trip over night so I promised him I would take you out and help you have a good time so do you have anything good that we can do, lexi rolled her eyes and said well I suppose your better than nothing shall we go into hotten, miles jumped up off his seat and said no no we cant, lexi was starting to get suspicious and why not miles are you hiding something from me, not knowing what to do miles said errr I cant because if Nicola sees us together then she will get the wrong idea and then tell dad and god knows what it will lead to them, hows bout we go into leeds there is some good clubs there. Lexi agree to go into leeds with miles and the booked a taxi and went to a club in leeds.
Back in the pub in hotten
Carl made his way over to the blonde women sat at the bar chatting away to the barman. He put his hands over her eyes and whispered in her ear hey gorgeous sorry I didn’t recognize you there cmon lets go over here where its quicker. Carl lead his mystery women by the hand other to a corner where there was a sofa and it was every private and nobody was around it. They sat down and carl put his arm around her and said ok you can take the wig off now we are safe we don’t know anyone in here.
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Post by rtzen01 on May 26, 2008 19:49:18 GMT 1
OMG this is so great !! Please post more tongiht so we can see what happens
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Post by missking on May 26, 2008 19:51:14 GMT 1
thanks for the lovely comments rebekah i will try and do another one tonight
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Post by rtzen01 on May 26, 2008 19:54:54 GMT 1
yay if u can i cant wait to read it OMG i so want to know whats going on
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Post by missking on May 26, 2008 20:57:36 GMT 1
thanks for the great comments people i have done more its not every good but let me no what you think
I am quite enjoying being blonde its funny I fancy dying my hair blonde what do you think carl, no way I don’t want to be with a blonde bimbo anyways it will take for ever to turn your hair blonde from brown, oi you the mystery women said slapping carls leg if I want to be blonde I will be so I am keeping the wig on for abit and you are seeing lexi aren’t you and she’s a blonde bimbo, snuggling up to the mystery women carl said I don’t want to be with her I want you and you no it so come here am give us a kiss.
Miles and lexi hadn’t made it to the pub in leeds they passed a cinema on the way and decided to go and watch saw 4. the film had just finished and they was making there way outside arm in arm, miles do you fancy going into hotten now I think Nicola will be tucked up in bed with your dad bye now don’t you think, shut up you that’s not miles said nudging lexi and laughing miles was having a funny time with lexi and he had forgotten why he was out with lexi and he agreed to go into hotten with lexi.
Lexi and miles went into the same pub that carl was in. they hadn’t seen him and they went to the other side of the building to what carl and his mystery women was in. miles what do you want to drink, orange juice please lexi you no I don’t drink, o ye sorry I forgot. Lexi and miles sat down with there drinks and they was getting very cosy with each other when miles made a move on lexi and they started kissing when lexi pulled away from him, whats up lexi, I cant do this to carl its not fair after everything he has been through I cant do this to him, well he is in this every pub with another women right now and not on a business trip. Lexis face dropped WHAT in this pub who is he with, oh my god lexi I am so sorry I … miles couldn’t get another word in lexi was marching around the pub looking for carl with miles chasing around after her like a headless chicken.
Carl and his mystery women where having a good night laughing and joking with each other all cuddled up on the sofa in the corner drinking pints like there weren’t going to be sold anymore. Lexi spotted them and she ran at them like a bull in a china shop, carl saw her cuming and he stood up followed by his mystery women. You cheating b******* who is she then, don’t talk to carl like that, lexi recognize the voice at once, lexi throw herself at her, miles just stood back and admired the bitch fight that was taking place, while carl was trying to break them up, miles help me with you carl said angrily, lexi ripped the wig off the mystery women and said I new it was u I new it was u. miles had hold off lexi and carl had hold of the mystery women. Cmon chas we need to get away from the animal that’s seems to have arrived, miles was in shock its chas I thought you was going to see someone descent, oi don’t talk about chas like that carl said angrily, lexi was wriggling about in miles arms trying to get free, chas hadn’t said anything she just had her head tucked into carls body she had been hurt then lexi knocked her off her feet... .
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Post by rtzen01 on May 26, 2008 21:23:20 GMT 1
Thanks for another update Charlie Aw glad it was Chas. Brill update Can't wait to read more
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Post by missking on May 26, 2008 21:58:22 GMT 1
thanks for all the great comments sorry i rushed it abit at the end i will try and do a bit more tomorrow
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Post by missking on May 27, 2008 12:08:49 GMT 1
thanks for the comments heres a little more let me no what you think
Miles managed to get lexi outside with help from the barman, the barman left them once he had got her outside and lexi was so upset and angry she just feel onto miles in floods of tears, miles held onto her tightly for agers when lexi finally pulled herself away and said can I stay with you tonight please I cant go back to dale view with carl and the slag being there, miles agree and they booked a taxi home.
Carl was hugging chas and kissing her on her head he though she was hurt, but then chas pulled away from him and she was in fits of laughter what up with you chas I thought you was hurt, I am she broke my nail. Carl and chas were in fits of laughter now and they decided it was time to go home. Come on chas I think I have got some nail repairer back at my house, you best have that’s the only reason I am coming back to yours. Carl picked his coat put and handed chas hers and the were just walking away hand in hand when chas broke free and ran back to where they had been sat, chas whats up, I forgot your wig I was wearing, haha that’s not my wig chas its matts, what why would matt have a wig, haha well when we were kids matt always used to dress up as girls and he used to go out dressed as a girl, chas burst out laughing your joking me carl, no come on when we get home I will find the videos out to show you
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Post by rtzen01 on May 27, 2008 15:48:38 GMT 1
yet another great update Can't wait for more charlie , soon hopefully
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Post by tomsgirl on May 27, 2008 18:05:41 GMT 1
Wow what another fab story here Charlie more please x
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Post by missking on May 27, 2008 19:36:39 GMT 1
i have done a little more this bit is just carl and chas though thanks for all the lovely comments mean alot
Carl and chas got home chas went straight into the kitchen flicked the kettle on and went searching through the draws for a nail file for her broken nail, carl went straight into the room and sat down on the sofa he was so tired as soon as his head hit the back of the sofa he was fast asleep, chas made the tea and she didn’t noticed carl was asleep she shouted to tell him that his tea was ready and she got answer so she took the tea through to him and she saw him asleep on the sofa, she put the tea down and ran upstairs and brought down a blanket and covered carl up in it she sat down next to him just looking at him and stroking his hair thinking to her self “ she was so happy to be in the same room as him again she just wanted to be with him all the time and she decided that she was going to do what ever she needed to do to stay with him,” she decided to leave him on the sofa alone to get some sleep and she went upstairs and got into his bed with his t-shirt on and went to sleep.
The next morning
Carl woke up with a sore head and he looked around himself and he jumped up he thought chas had done a runner on him he ran outside and across to the pub which was just opening, Diane Diane have you seen chas this morning, no sorry carl she rang in from her mobile last night saying she couldn’t get in this morning. Carls face dropped he though she didn’t want to be with him he felt like a fool, he walked back to dale view with his tall between his legs really sad holding his head with headache. Chas was just waking up and she thought she best go downstairs to see if carl was up. She was just walking down the stairs as carl walked through the door…
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