Breaking Hearts

[carlsbabe]

Carl walked through the village,raging inside.He smashed through a crowd of tourists,not even caring about the murmurings.He kept walking,unaware that a car was slowly pulling up behind him."OI,Carl!" He stopped,and turned to see Coleen getting out of a black Merc with a large sports bag."And what do I owe this this pleasure?"he said sarcastically,not pleased at the fact his ex-wife was here in the village,never mind standing in front of him."Here"Coleen said,thrusting the bag into his arms."Take that silly cows things.I never want to see her again.The dirty slapper!" "What are you on about?"Carl had always thought his ex was a little bit mad,but this made no sense."ANYA!I dont care.Im GLAD shes living with you from now on!" "WAIT!"Carl yelled as she got in her car and began to drive off,"WAIT FOR GODS SAKE!Shes VISITING!Im not-shes not-you cant-" "Oh yeah,tell her she starts the local school Monday."Coleen cried as the car sped off.

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Come on post some more please xxx

[carlsbabe]

Later,at Home Farm,Carl was waiting impatiently in the living room for Anya to return.Kelly and Scarlett were sitting opposite him,watching their favourite soap.Kelly and Scarlett had so much in common.Kelly looked down at Scarlett,whose head was resting on her shoulder.Kelly still remembered Anya and Matthew that morning.She didnt want Scarlett,who was such a sweet girl,mixing with that girl or any of her friends.Scarlett was like a little sister to her,and they had a great bond.Scarlett told Kelly everything,and they loved shopping together.Kelly giggled as she remembered the last time they went into Hotten.They were feeling a bit silly,and as they went in to pick out Kellys wedding dress.Scarlett took a liking to a puffy-skirted white dress,and had jumped into it.Kelly still had the pictures on her phone.As she saw Scarlett in her mind,she had looked so grown up.Kelly had joked that that was the dress Scarlett would marry Daz,her long-term boyfriend,in."What?"said Scarlett,lookin up at her."Nothing!Its just..its just i love this bit"

[rtzen01]

Please post more this is great

[carlsbabe]

Suddenly,the doorbell rang."Ill get it!!"shrieked Scarlett,who was going on a date with Daz.When she opened the door,Anya barged in,knocking Scarlett over."Move"said Anya,as she fell to the ground."I think I just did!"said Scarlett,watching the back of her dyed head disappear upstairs.Carl came rushing out."Anya upstairs?"indicating upstairs.Not even waiting for her to answer,he set off up after,yelling something about Coleen.

Later,at dinner,the whole family were seated around the table.Scarlett had given up on her date with Daz.He was half an hour late.The doorbell rang."Ill get it"said Anya,getting up."NO!Ill get it!"cried Scarlett,standing up so suddenly Edna Birch would have had a heart-attack."Jeez"said Anya,giving her a unfriendly look."Desperate much?" Scarlett glared at her.She wasnt going to let her win.Not this time."No,"she replied coolly,"not at all.Get the door,if thats what makes you happy."She sat back down.The rest of table of the table watched this exchange in silence,their eyes swivelling from side to side as if it was a tennis match.Anya smirked,striding towards the door.She had guessed who it was.She was right.When she opened the door,Daz was standing on the step with a bunch of flowers."Hi,"he said nervously,"are you Anya?"he had heard about her from his phone call with Scarlett earlier.Anya thought to herself.She wanted a chance to really annoy her half-sister.Here was her chance."Yeah I am.Are you looking for Scarlett?" "Yeah.Is she here?" "No,sorry,she went out with her friend,um,Gary or something." "Oh"said Daz,looking gloomy,"its just that-" "I know,you two had plans.She was sooo mean,completely blowing you off like that." "I guess"said Daz,turing to leave."Well,thanks anyway.See you"he muttered as he walked down the drive."Wait!" said Anya,thinking of a great plan."Yeah?"Daz turned around."If you want,we can go to the cinema later,like,if your not busy?"offered Anya,pretending to be all shy.A smile spread across Daz's face."Yeah alright.See you there at 8?" "Yeah,okay."said Anya,giving him a little wave as she closed the door.She walked back to the table,and took her seat."Who was it?"asked Scarlett immiedietly.Anya threw her a look,and turned to Carl."Just a guy selling junk."She began to eat,enjoying the dismayed look on Scarletts face.

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Loved that last bit please post more

[carlsbabe]

Nearing 7:30,Anya was already dressed up in a sparkly top and skinny jeans with a pair of black boots she just had to have.She couldnt wait.It was time for major sabotage.She was going to sabotage Scarletts life they way she had sabotaged her family.She finished straigtening her hair,picked up her clutch bag full of the basic neccesities and walked downtstairs.


At Jack and Diane's,Daz was busy getting ready.He felt excited.He loved Scarlett,but he kind of liked Anya as well.Its wouldnt do anyone any harm,as long as nothing happened.He still didnt know why he he was all dressed up in a shirt and his best jeans,but they were going as just friends,he kept trying to remind himself.


At Home Farm,Anya modelled her outfit for the King brothers."Stunning,as always"Matt said,grinning.Jimmy agreed.Carl narrowed his eyes."Who did you say you were going with again?" Anya rolled her eyes."I told you,just some girls i met in Hotten." Matt stared at her.He knew she was lying.She purposely avoided his gaze.Just then Kelly came in.She stared at Anya's top.That girl,however nasty she is,has a great taste in clothes,she thought.Anya noticed her staring and panicked,thinking she was staring at her slightly domed stomach."What are you looking at?"she snapped,covering her hands over her stomach.Kelly looked at her,a real who-are-you-to-snap-at-me look."Excuse me?" "Anya-"Carl began to say,but Matthew interrupted him."Look,leave it out,okay?" Matt turned and looked at Anya,as if to say dont start.Anya knew what he was thinking."Better be off then.later."She looked Kelly up and down,and headed for the front door.When she was out of sight,she let out a breath.She was surrounded by cows.As she reached for the handle,Scarlett stepped out in front of her."You better not be lying about where your going tonight,because ill ask around.Nothing gets past me."she hissed.Anya felt anger nearly erupt inside her,but then she thought rationally.She raised her hand.Scarlett flinched,thinking she was going to hit her."Dont EVER think your better than me again,cos your not,and you never will be"Anya whispered calmly,"and dont EVER stand near the mirror again"indicating the hall mirror."It might crack with the ugliness,and we wouldnt want that now would we?"She wrenched the door open,and,pushing past Scarlett,stepped out into the cool evening air.

[rtzen01]

That bit was great more please !!!

[carlsbabe]

Scarlett sat in the darkness,alone,of her room.She was thinking about Daz.How could he just blow her off like he had today?She picked up her phone.She decided she would call him,and give him a piece of her mind.And maybe ask what he was doing tomorrow.She scrolled down her contacts,and hit the call button when his name came up.



Anya and Daz were sitting in PizzaHut,talking.They were getting on great.Daz felt a pang of guilt,but then put it to the back of his mind,remembering what Scarlett had done to him that day."Back in one sec."Daz stood up and headed to the toilets.Anya sat back,surveying the restaurant.Sudddenly,she heard a ringtone.She looked at the table,and saw Daz's phone vibrating and flashing.She picked it up to see the caller.Scarlett.She let it ring out,and then she deleted it from missed calls.


Back in her room,Scarlett listened as Daz's voicemail came on.She threw her phone back down on her bed,and flopped back beside it.She swallowed back tears.

[carlsbabe]

In the early hours of the next morning,Anya woke with a start.She raced to the landing bathroom just in time.

Down the hall,Chas Dingle opened her eyes.She could hear the muffled sounds of someone retching.She stood up,wrapping her nightrobe around her.She began to walk down the landing.

Anya was so busy with her morning sickness,she hadnt locked the door.And she hadnt heard Chas coming in."Anya??"Chas cried."STOP!Go away!Im fine!"Anya shouted Anya,tears trickling down her cheeks.Chas put her hands on her hips."Im not going anywhere,and neither are you,until you tell me whats wrong." Anya stood up wobbly.Her stomach was exposed as she reached for the towel rail.Chas spotted it."Oh my God."she cried."Please..please dont tell anyone."Anya started sobbing.Chas sat down on the edge of the bath,and pulled Anya down beside her."Its okay.Dont cry.And i thought you were all tough,bullying poor Scarlett."Anya gave her the dirtiest look ever."Okay,okay!Ill drop it.So...tell me."Anya told her the whole story,how,when,who was the father,and why she was here."Im going to help you,we all are.But you have to tell Carl-" "NO!Not right now." "Okay,but you know,I was there too." Anya looked up from wiping her eyes with her pyjama top."What?" "You heard me.I had a baby when i was your age.14,isnt it?" Anya swallowed."What happened?" Chas looked down,but not before Anya could see the sadness in her eyes."We-we dont get on very well." "Oh." Chas looked up."But enough of my life.Have you chosen any baby names?" Anya smiled,happy that Chas knew how it felt.

[rtzen01]

Loved the last bit keep up the good story

[gudboy]

Its really great, keep it up!! Although i thought Chas and Carl were married? They don't seem to be in many scenes together though!!

[rtzen01]

Ye i quite like to see carl and chas in more scenes togeter, although don't let the story focus heavily on them, but so far its really good MORE PLEASE!!!

[carlsbabe]

okay,Chas and Carl scene coming up!

[rtzen01]

Thanks can't wait

[carlsbabe]

Chas and Carl sat alone in King and Sons offfice.Scarlett and Kelly had gone to Hotten to pick out the bouqet,Jimmy and Matthew had gone to the bank to sort out a problem with some of the workers wages,and Anya had gone goodness knows where.Carl was checking his email,as the Home Farm computer was broken.Chas sat on the desk,staring absent-mindly at the screen.Carl looked up."Alright?"Chas shook herself.She stared at Carl"Sorry,I was thinking of something else." "Yeah,you were!So,whats wrong?"Carl asked,wrapping his arms round her waist."Nothing!Everything alright.Honest" Carl raised his eyebrows,but said nothing more.He knew if the more he pressed he,the more moodier she would get with him."Fancy doing something tonight?"Chas asked him,dying to change the subject.If he kept at it,she would end up spilling everything.She did not want that to happen."Alright,ye.I was going to suggest a night in,but that would be impossible,wouldnt it?" "Chas smiled."Ye,it would.What bout the Woolie,as usual?" "Anything to be alone with you"Chas giggled,and kissed him tenderly.

[carlsbabe]

Sorry its short,im in a bit of a rush!

[gudboy]

No, thats fine Carlsbabe, its great!!

[rtzen01]

please post another bit

[carlsbabe]

Thanks guys!More soon!

[rtzen01]

Ye i want more

[carlsbabe]

Just do everyone knows,my goddaughter was born yesterday,so thats why I havnt witten that much!Sorry!

[rtzen01]

Congratulations, hope she is healthy and well, can't wait for the next bit tough

[carlsbabe]

Anya was in Hotten,again,buying supplies for the next day.She couldnt believe she had to go to that stupid school for nancys.And she had hated it when Carl had gone,"Oh,its LOVELY,it really is,you'll fit in no bother!And Scarlett will show you around too.Its nice to have a sister,isnt it?"She rolled her eyes.Just then,a group of teenagers came towards her.Deciding to make herself known,she waited for them.



At the Woolpack,Carl and Chas were busy were talking in low voices."Shes not,you know,getting on that well with Scarlett.I think Scarlett could be a great influence on her if she let her." "Yeah,I know.But how would we get them talking?Like,im just saying this,now no offence,but am,Anyas very,emmmm,headstrong."Chas said carefully.She didnt want to ruin this night.Carl put his head in his hands."I know."he murmured through his fingers."I think I need a holiday."It hit him and Chas at the same time.They looked at eachother,eyes wide.

[carlsbabe]

Thank you,shes doing fine,the lil stunner lol!

[carlsbabe]

Later,back at Home Farm,Carl and Chas were pacing,waiting,for Anya to return.She had been in Hotten for the whole day with her new "friends".Finally,Carl gave in."Im ringing her.I dont care!"he snapped when Chas tried to protest.


In the field that Anya and her friends were sitting in,drinking,the only noise that you could hear were the sounds of laughter,cheering and a slight ringing.Anya broke away from a hooded boy she was kissing and looked at her phone."1 sec"she said to the boy,who began to shuffle."Ello?" "Anya?" "Carl?What?Why are you ringing me?" "We need to talk Anya.Its important.Seriously.Just come home,okay?" "Fine"Anya sighed,and hung up."Got to go lads.See you at school,yeah?" "Yeah,"they chorused.Anya headed for the bus,stumbling a little.She cursed herself inwardly.She shouldnt have given in to temptation.She shouldnt have had that last vodlka.

[rtzen01]

Liked the last bit can't wait for more

[carlsbabe]

Anya stormed in,mumbling to herself.She wasnt seriously drunk,just a bit tipsy.Carl looked up."Finally!I was about to....."Carl paused,narrowing his eyes."Were-were you...drinking,Anya?" Anya stood up straight.Her eyes were crossing,but she struggled to look as un-drunk as possible."No"she said as innocently as she could.Carl laughed"for a second there,you looked kinda drunk!" She threw her father a withering look.He stopped laughing.Anya turned to Chas."So,whats the big news?" Carl and Chas looked at eachother."We're going on holidays!Were going on Boxing Day.Isnt that great??" "its ok,i guess.How long more?Two weeks?Okay,il go and pack."Anya walked out of the room at an angle,and they could hear her singing to herself as she climbed the stairs.

[rtzen01]

that bit was good , post more when u have time, how is the goddaughter

[rtzen01]

Come on more !!!