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Post by rtzen01 on May 21, 2007 21:53:29 GMT 1
that last bit was great, the very end was quite funny can't wait for more Carlsbabe both your stories are great  |
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Post by carlsbabe on May 23, 2007 21:24:47 GMT 1
Thank you!Youre just as great to put up with them!
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Post by rtzen01 on May 23, 2007 21:30:27 GMT 1
please post more |
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Post by rtzen01 on May 26, 2007 16:15:08 GMT 1
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Post by rtzen01 on May 27, 2007 17:43:18 GMT 1
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Post by carlsbabe on May 28, 2007 20:06:01 GMT 1
The next moning,Anya decided to leave early,to avoid the burning stares.She didnt feel up to it.She was feeling a bit unwell,after that morning's sickness.She awoke at six,and showered,dressed and ate before before leaving at seven.She left a note for Matt so that the family wouldn't be worried.What was she talking about,she scoffed to herself.The last thing they probably wanted to see was Anya.But,she smiled to herself,it was all so worth it.
Scarlett woke up at seven,her usual time to rise.She sat up gingerly.God,that Anya could throw a punch.She got up,and headed for the shower.
Chas was already up,cooking breakfast for all.When Scarlett appeared,she pushed some sausages and bacon onto a plate,and ladled some beans onto it too. "thanks,Chas,but im not so hungry" muttered Scarlett,reaching for a glass of water.Chas raised her eyebrows."You sure?Well,i suppose Carl will eat for two." Sha laid the plate down."Are you okay?You know,after last night?" Scarlett looked at her.The bruises were evident on her face."Im fine" said Scarlett flatly,sipping on her drink.Chas knew when to drop it,so she did.Carl's sleepy head appeared.He pottered in,still in his pyjamas.He slid on to the counter stool,grabbing the plate."I knew there was a smell of bacon"he began to wolf down his breakfast hungrily."Oh bah,mmmm,hoo are yo?"He manged to force out,his mouth stuffed.Scarlett looked up."i said I was fine!" she stood up."I'll be leaving"she picked up her schoolbag,slung it over her shoulder,and left.Chas looked at Carl.He swallowed."What?!?" Chas shook her head,and continued to dish out breakfast,as more of the Kings and a King-to-be appeared.
Anya was sitting at the bus-stop.She tried playing with her phone,but the battery was dead.She would have done homework,but if anyone would see her they would have thought she was a swot.She sat back,annd thought about her appointment.It was on at ten past eleven,five minutes after break ended.She hesitated,and then decided to give a wander into Hotten.She wouldnt bother going into school.She stood up,and checked the timetable for the next bus to Hotten.Seven-thirty.She could wait that long,she guessed.She sat back down and waited for time to pass her by.
Seven fifteen.Scarlett checked her watch.Why the bloody hell did she leave so early for?!?She didnt even tie up her hair,just ran a quick comb through it,never mind her make-up.She considered all her choices-1.Return to Home Farm,and look like a right ninny after leaving like that.2.Go mitching.Never.Couldn't risk her future as a high-class radiographer for a day of wandering around,dragging a seemingly 10-ton bag behind her.3.Try to go home,where she and Carrie lived.Carrie was away,tending to a stay at home patient.Scarlett considered that.She didnt have any keys though.She could just find a window to climb through,simple.She started to walk towards Millbrook Cottage.
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Post by carlsbabe on May 28, 2007 20:06:48 GMT 1
Ugh!Not as long as I had hoped!Dont worry,i'll right more soon!
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Post by rtzen01 on May 28, 2007 21:13:49 GMT 1
That bit was good loved it all i can't wait for more |
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Post by chasdinglefan on May 28, 2007 22:22:04 GMT 1
Great update, please do it again soon!!!
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Post by rtzen01 on May 29, 2007 20:13:57 GMT 1
please post more, a big bit if possible xxx ;D |
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Post by carlsbabe on May 29, 2007 21:00:35 GMT 1
Scarlett walked around her house,looking at every angle for a way to get in.She felt very excited.She didnt even know why she wanted to get in,just to get out of the cold if anything.She saw her bedroom window was slightly open,just a fraction.But a fraction could get her in.Just undo the window lock which was just beside the opening.She adjusted her uniform,threw her heavy bag into a bush for safe-keeping,and began to climb,taking her time,measuring every foothold and cranny before leaving her weight on them.
Anya boarded the seven-thirty bus,whch actually arrived a little early."Alright?" the bus-driver looked her up and down,obviously wondering why she was not at home.Her uniform was conspicuos.She sat down at the back.She liked sitting back here.She could look at everyone without them looking at her.She rolled up her skirt,and stuffed her school blazer into her satchel.She pulled on her trackie top.There.Not so bad.She sat back down,calculating in her head what she would have time to do before her appoinment.
Scarlett pushed herself onto the ledge below her window,and sat awkwardly on the small ledge.She turned her back to the world below her,and began to push her hand through the small space left open.She could see all her boyband posters on the wall,her clothes scattered around the room,her stereo with its mountain of cd's on top of it.She remembered how Daz had repaired it when she had spilt orange juice down the back of it where all the wires were.She giggled as she remembered how her mum had come thundering up every five minutes to make sure thay weren't up to anything.Then her happiness turned to anger as she remembered the worst memory,one she would never forget.The memory of Anya kissing Daz,and Daz letting her.The memory of her heart breaking,the memory of the shame,the memory of being pinned up against the wall and being beaten up.She tuggest at the lock furiously,slipping off her seat ont he slim ledge.She made one final attempt to grab the ledge,before falling,soundlesely,fifteen feet to the ground.
Anya got off the bus a while later.She thought about where she would go first.She had a tenner for lunch.She went into the nearest record shop she could find.She loved music.It was part of her life.She was a terrific singer,if she did say so herself.But no-one had heard her singing,except for her rubber duck in her old bathtub.She rummaged through the Sales Basket,looking for any decent tracks.
Ashley walked along the road past Millbrook Cottage, to his sermons.He stopped short when he heard a groaning.He looked around,seeing a figure roll around in the grass beside the house."What in God's name-" he hurried through the gates,hoping he wouldn't be persecuted for trespassing.He cut across the small lawn to see Scarlett rolling around in the grass,tears streaming down her cheeks."Scarlett?Scarlett,whats wrong?"he knelt down beside a moaning Scarlett,who's arm was twisted at a grotesque angle."Owwwwww....my arm,my arm,my arm......" Ashely considered for a moment,before picking her up in his arms,and jogging through the village,looking for an available car.
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Post by carlsbabe on May 29, 2007 21:01:16 GMT 1
Not very long,i'll try again....
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Post by rtzen01 on May 30, 2007 7:22:19 GMT 1
that bit was good you're so good at writing these scripts |
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Post by carlsbabe on May 30, 2007 17:54:36 GMT 1
“Aha!” cried Anya.She picked up Dance Hits 2004.She turned it slowly, wondering was it really worth £2.99.She read the list of tracks at the back. She looked at the front cover again.Yeah.It was nearly four years old, but the tracks were pretty good. On her way up to the counter, she spotted some posters. She walked over to them. If she was going to live at Home Farm, she would have to turn the spare room into her own.
“Paddy! PADDY!”Gasped Ashley, running as fast as his legs could carry him into the vets. “One sec, mate”said Paddy, not looking up from the mountain of paperwork that was his desk. “I-I need your car, Paddy” Paddy looked up, recognizing the voice.”Ashley?What the-“ “Please,Paddy,help us” “alright,but I'm not much of a doctor,I'm a vet you see-“ “NO!No,no,no,no,no!Drive us to the hospital!” “Oh! Oh, yes.Right.Follow me.” Paddy scooped up his keys, and strode briskly out of the vets, with Ashley and Scarlett in tow.
Anya sat down in the Hawthorn Café, with her hot chocolate. She felt starving. She didn’t eat a fulfilling breakfast that morning. She grabbed some crisps out of her bag, and began to munch and drink happily. She looked in the record store bag. So far, she was happy with her purchases. But she was nowhere near done yet.No; way.She still had to check out the shoe shop for future spending sprees.
“Help!” cried Paddy,bursting into A&E at Hotten General Hospital.Nurses immiedetley flooded over to Ashley,taking over.They pulled Scarlett off of Ashley and lay her down in a trolley.”AAAAAAH! My ARM!” she shrieked, as nurses pulled it this way and that way. A nurse came over to Paddy and Ashley.”Hi, im Nurse Lewis. Are you...the, parents?”She asked cautiously, her eyes flickering between them. Paddy and Ashley looked at each other. “No! No, we’re not toge-together, if that’s what you mean!” stuttered Paddy. “No, neither of us are.The parents, I mean. Shall I contact her father?” “If you could, thanks! Well, I’ll keep you posted” She gave Paddy one last look before she left, following Scarlett and her army of nurses the x-ray room.
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Post by rtzen01 on May 30, 2007 18:13:29 GMT 1
loved the last bit please post more,......i'm hooked |
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Post by rtzen01 on May 31, 2007 20:52:10 GMT 1
Please post more i can't wait 2 see what happens next luv Chas Dingle xxxxx [ love ur banner ] |
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Post by carlsbabe on May 31, 2007 21:48:01 GMT 1
Thanks!I hust found it lying around on the net!
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 2, 2007 9:27:16 GMT 1
Please post more soon i can't wait 2 know what happens next I'm hooked...... luv Chas dingle xxx |
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 2, 2007 13:19:17 GMT 1
Back at King and Sons Offices,Carl and his brothers were sitting at their desks,working.Carl had just started his second account book when his phone began to ring in the otherwise silent office.He glanced at his brothers.They looked up at the sudden ringtone.He picked up his phone quickly.He checked who was calling-Ashley.What did he want?He wasn't exactly friends with Carl or any of the Kings." 'Ello?"he said into the phone."Hello?Carl-this is Ashley here.Im in the hospital." "Right,"said Carl slowly,not knowing what this had to do with him."Um-Scarletts had an accident.I don't think its very serious,but-" "WHAT?!?!"Carl leapt up off his seat.Jimmy and Matthew saw their brother,and came to the doors of their offices to see what had happened."All right!I'll be right there-thanks,Ashley!"Carl jogged towards the door."Wait!What are you doing?"Matthew cried as he grabbed his brothers arm."Come on-Scarletts in hospital!" Carl shrugged away from Matthew's grip,and legged it out the door.Jimmy looked at Matthew.He pulled on his coat,and the two brothers ran after Carl.
"Anya King?"Anya stood up shakily.She was in the waiting room of the clinic.She hadnt really thought about this all morning,but now that she was here,her legs felt like jelly.She gathered up her assorted bags,and went through to the surgery.She knocked on the door,and when she heard "Come in",she entered.A female doctor looked up from some papers on her desk."Anya?Come in,sit down." She stood up and gestured for Anya to sit on a chair opposite her desk.Anya sat down gingerly.The doctor checked her computer system."A man called Matthew King made the appointment.Is he your father?" "No,my uncle." "Ah,yes.Your father knows,I presume.Does he approve?" "No,my dad doesnt know.Not yet anyway." The doctor looked at her.The name on her badge read Dr.Kennedy."And when are you planning to tell him?" Anya looked down at her hands,folded on top of her knees. "Im-im not quite sure.Soon"she added."soon."
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Post by rocktheworld7 on Jun 2, 2007 15:58:17 GMT 1
Great update:)
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 2, 2007 18:10:44 GMT 1
That was good please post more |
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Post by chasdinglefan on Jun 3, 2007 12:19:33 GMT 1
Post more soon please!!!
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 3, 2007 14:49:27 GMT 1
The sliding doors opened,and Carl sprinted in,followed closely by Jimmy and Matthew.He caught up with a nurse."Excuse me,do you know where Scarlett Nicolls' is?Im her father,see." "Oh,yes.This way."she led him down the hall,and into a ward."The very last cubicle,on the right." "Thanks." Carl began to jog down the ward.When he reached it,he flung back the curtains."Scarlett?" "Oh,Carl!" he walked over and bent down to give her a big hug.When he straightened himself up,he turned to the doctor standing at the end of the bed."Well?"Carl asked him,"whats wrong?" The doctor looked over his glasses at the clipboard he had in his hand."Well,she has a broken elbow,and she sprained wrist.She is also complaining of a pain in her knee,but I suspect it is just a fracture.We want to put a cat on that elbow,and maybe a support band on her wrist,and then we will discharge her." "Thats great,thanks." "Well,I'll leva you for a bit.We will be along in a moment to put a cast on her arms." The doctor left.Carl turned to Scarlett."What happened?" Scarlett went red."I just thought..you see....I left too early...'cos I didnt want to talk about last night.....and then,I was really REALLY bored and cold and stuff,so I just thought I would go home...to,like,where mum lives.....but the doors werent open so I thought I'd climb through a window...but i kinda fell..." "Well,we guessed that much" "And then Ashley found me and brought me here.He musta rang you,too." "Yeah,he did.Scarlett,what were you thinking?If you had landed on your head,or your neck,you could have been paralysed or even died." "I KNOW!Im sorry!" "Well,I'd best call Carrie then.She'll want to come home,I suppose.Talk to you in a bit."He kissed her goodbye,and the nurses came in to bring her down to get her cast.Carl looked up Carrie's number in his phone,and pressed CALL.
Anya left the clinic,after talking about the options,what to eat,what NOT to eat,what to do,what NOT to do....blah,blah,blah.She had been given numeroues leaflets,and another appointment for an ultrasound at Hotten General Hospital.She checked the time.She might as well have another quick look around.She started towards a new clothes shop that she had seen adertised.She should really do this more often.
Just when Carl hung up on Carrie,his phone rang again.He checked the Caller ID.It was a number he didnt know."Hello?" "Hello,is this Mr.Carl King?" "Yeah,it it.Whose calling?" "Im Sarai Smith,Im the secretary of St.Marys.Scarlett and Anya were absent today,do you know where they are?" Carl didnt really pay attention to the last name. "Oh,its okay,Scarlett's in hospital." "Oh,alright.And Anya?" "What about Anya?What did she do?" "Oh,she never did anything,Mr.King.She wasn't at school today." Carl's eyes widened."I-I don't know where she is," "Oh,dear.Um,well,shall I call the police?" "No,she'll be back I'd say.I'll deal with her then.Thanks." He hung up."Who was that?" asked Jimmy."The school,wondering where Scarlett and Anya are." Matthew looked away.Carl noticed this.He was about to say something but then Jimmy interrupted,"Wheres Anya???" "I don't know,"he looked at Matthew again,"but im going to find out."
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 3, 2007 15:01:01 GMT 1
loved that bit please post more |
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 4, 2007 11:56:48 GMT 1
I won't be coming on here for a week or so,im going on holidasys!I probably will write some more before I leave
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Post by chasdinglefan on Jun 4, 2007 21:29:30 GMT 1
please do write more before you leave
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Post by porlock2000 on Jun 4, 2007 21:38:40 GMT 1
Pretty pleeeeeeeaaaase!!
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 9, 2007 17:05:53 GMT 1
Please post more with lots of carl and chas luv chas dingle xxx [all ur stories r great carlsbabe] |
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 10, 2007 21:57:49 GMT 1
It was five to four.Anya adjusted herself on the bus.She fixed up her uniform,and hid all the leaflets and her cd's in her bag.She chucked in her appointment card as well.She would have to pretend that she was at school,and make it really beleivable.No problem.She was good at that.She stood up as the bus reached the stop.She walked down the aisle and out the door without thanking the driver.She began to walk back to Home Farm.
Carl was waiting at the dining room table.He was going to MURDER Anya.He winced,and regretted the phrase he used.All day,he had tried to see what was up with Matt.He would turn red whenever he mentioned the situation,and when Carl pestered him,he had stood up and walked out.He hadn't seen him since.If he had encouraged her to do anything....Carl checked his watch again.The front door suddenly slammed.Carl stood up abruptly.Chas poked her head around the dining room door."Only me!" she noticed the hardness in Carl's face."Whats wrong?" she walked over to the table,and sat down on it in front of him."Oh,its Anya!" Chas froze,wondering whether she had told him.Well,if she had,he certainly seemed to be taking it better than she could had imagined."Um,what,what about her?" "I don't know,thats the problem!The school's secretary rang up today,and asked where Scarlett and Anya were-" "Where's Scarlett?"interrupted Chas,puzzled."She only went and broke her bloody arm didn't she!She's upstairs,in her bedroom.We're waiing for Carrie to come home." "I'll be back in a mo"said Chas,and she rushed up to see what happend to Scarlett.I hope Anya has a good excuse,thought Chas.If she doesn't,well.....
"And then,the doctors said I have to rest for a bit."confirmed Scarlett,after telling Chas the whole story.Chas stared at her."So,let me get this straight,you climbed up the side of your house,sat on your window sill and thought you wouldn't fall??"Chas loved Scarlett dearly,but she could be a bit careless sometimes.Suddenly,she could hear raised voices downstairs.Uh oh.Chas stood up suddenly."One sec,"she raced downstairs,leaving Scarlett staring after her,bemused.
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Post by porlock2000 on Jun 10, 2007 22:06:13 GMT 1
Great!! loving it! Please post more
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