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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 11, 2007 7:17:01 GMT 1
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 12, 2007 15:02:29 GMT 1
Chas flew into the hall to find Carl standing opposite Anya,staring coldly at her."WHERE WERE YOU?"he shouted angrily.Chas took a step back.She had never seen him this angry before."I was at school,where do you think I was?" Anya replied calmly,placing her bag on the floor gently."No,you weren't!" Anya froze,and turned slowly to face her father."Why do you say that?" "Because,Anya,the school rang!They wanted to know where you and Scarlett were!" "Where was Scarlett?"asked Anya,feighning curiosity.She didnt really give a toss about Scarlett's whereabouts that day.She just wanted to get out of this conversation.Pronto."Thats not the point!The point is that you never turned up at school!Where were you,Anya?Just tell me!" Anya walked right passed Carl,towards the stairs.She turned as she placed a foot on the first step.She smirked."Carl,you know what?Its actually,would you believe,none of your business!"she walked quickly up the stairs.She had left him speechless,if only even for a moment.
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 12, 2007 16:14:05 GMT 1
Ha,ha loved that last bit please post more soon...  |
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 12, 2007 20:04:47 GMT 1
Chas stared at her husband nervously.His eyes were fixed on the stairs."Well,we know she wasn't at school!"joked Chas half-heartedly.Carl seemed to be jolted out of his train of thought."I think I know how to find out where she was."he said slowly."How?"Chas asked him,worried if his methods could actually work.Carl went over to Anya's bag which she left on the floor.He caught it up and turned it upside down,shaking it vigouresly,The contents fell out,and landed on the tile floor with a variety of sounds,which echoed throughout the hall.Matthew King came through the front door.He was worried about Anya and her check up.He soon heard the loud noises,and flung open the door.The sight that met his eyes was very weird.His younger brother on his knees,rooting through some books and copies,a lunchbag,and some leaflets.Chas seemed to be very scared of the leaflets,trying to pull Carl away from the books and shooting the leaflets a very anxious look.Matthew lowered his eyes to read exactly what was on the leaflets.The clinic!They were leaflets from the clinic!He froze,and for a brief moment,his eyes met Chas'."What-what are you doing,Carl?" Carl sat back on his heels for a moment."Looking for Anya's mobile.Oh,what are these?"he reached out for the leaflets.Chas gave one final yank on his arm."One sec,Chas."he turned them the rightside up,and as his eyes read the words,his face turned into an utter picture of confusion.He looked at Matthew,then Chas,then back at the leaflets.He got up shakily."What......whats this?"
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 12, 2007 20:37:34 GMT 1
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Post by porlock2000 on Jun 12, 2007 20:51:04 GMT 1
ooo yes! More please! and soon!! lol
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Post by chasdinglefan on Jun 13, 2007 0:56:40 GMT 1
please post more!!! its great
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 17, 2007 22:17:48 GMT 1
Carl turned the leaflets over and over in his hands,scanning them in disbelief."What....How could.....oh,dear God..." Chas stared in shock at Carl.She wanted to speak out,to tell him the whole story,but something stopped her from uttering a word.Matthew swallowed.Carl looked around."This....these leaflets...their.....hmmm..."He glanced over them again,confused,and too much in shock for it to sink in.Suddenly,anger set in."What are these?WHAT THE HELL?" he yelled,throwing the leaflets into the air.The look on Matthew's face said it all."You-you knew?" he laughed,but it was a cold,empty laugh.He advanced through the mess of Anya's schoolbag,right up to Matthew,until they were almost nose to nose."You...you knew all along?So,what,you decided NOT to tell me?You know Matthew,she's my daughter,not yours!Wait,you probably TOLD her to go out and get pregnant!Maybe,maybe this was all a plan!Just to see how STUPID Carl is!I bet this is all a big joke to you,isn't it?" Chas looked at Carl desperately."Carl-Carl stop,this is stupid!" Carl didnt even look at her,just kept staring into the steely eyes of his brother. "No,Chastity!Stay out of it!You know Matthew,get your own life you can completely mess up!And stay out of mine!" The brothers stared at eachother with pure hatred. Matthew opened his mouth to retort,but then Chas interrupted."Guys,come on!This is ridiculous!" Carl turned to stare at his wife.Suddenly,they heard a meek cough at the stairs."Um,hello!Any chance of some dinner?" Carl turned slowly to face the stairs.His daughter Anya looked innocently at him.His eyes moved down to her stomach.Now he could see it.The gentle bump.Anya crossed her arms over her navel.She felt uncomfortable with her fathers funny looks. "Oh,of course!Im so sorry,Anya!" Chas stared at her husband's sudden change in attitude.Her and Matthew exchanged glances,which did not happen very often.Carl grinned,but there was something funny about his smile.Something not right.Anya didn't sense this."Um,okay."She had expected something harsher,folliwng her day of unattendence at school. "I had COMPLETELY frogotten you were eating for two!I'm so sorry!" Anya stared at her dad."Im sorry?" "You heard me." Anya's eyes dropped to the floor,where she saw the various leaflets scattered around her schoolbag.Her expression changed to a picture of horror."Oh,please,no,"she whispered softly.
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Post by chasdinglefan on Jun 17, 2007 22:31:45 GMT 1
great update!!! please post more soon!!!!
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Post by porlock2000 on Jun 17, 2007 22:43:20 GMT 1
More more more!!!
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 18, 2007 7:28:06 GMT 1
please post more i can't wait to see what happens next |
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Post by cielbr on Jun 19, 2007 9:53:28 GMT 1
great update more soon please
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 26, 2007 17:34:23 GMT 1
"Oh no!Thats the best you can come up with!Anya,what were you thinking?" Anya looked up into her father's face.He stared at her,as if she was a stranger,as if she meant nothing to him.
"Im-Im sorry." she whispered,dropping her eyes to her feet.
"You're fourteen!Fourteen,Anya!Too young to have a child!"
"Dad,I said I was sorry!"
"Sorry?Anya,this isn't drinking,or skipping school,this is bringing a child into the world!What do you know about children?What do you know about anything?"
Anya looked back up at her dad.He was so calm about all of this,but she knew he was going to blow any second,if she gave the wrong answer."Dad-"
"No,Anya!You're not-I just-I just don't beleive this-"
"IM SORRY,OKAY?!?!"
Carl looked up at his daughter,taking it all in.She's pregnant.His little girl,bringing her own child into the world.
"How could you?Did you go out and plan this?Or is the baby an accident?Well?Answer me!"He shouted the last sentence,his voice full of frustration.
Anya took a deep breath,and started to speak shakily,"I thought it was going to be okay.But then-then the father didnt want to know.But when its born,im going to take real good care of it,Dad,I swear.Its never going to think it was an accident.I know im fourteen,you dont need to keep reminding me.I know I don't know much,but I was going to learn."She stepped towards her dad."I was going to tell you,but I was waiting for the right time-"
"And when would the right time have been?When your in labour?I don't think so,Anya!"
"Dad,please,just calm down-"
"How can I bloody calm down?My daughter's a bloomin slapper!"
Matthew felt rage erupt inside him,but tried to keep it under control.Anya didnt deserve this."Cool it,Carl"
He placed a firm hand on his shoulder.
Carl turned and threw Matthew's hand back in his face.
"Stop it!You're gone flippen' mental!You have to do this dont you?Blow everyting out of proprtion!"shouted Anya,not caring anymore.
"You haven't seen mental."threatened Carl menacingly.
Chas stared at her husband.What was this change in his personality?She stared at his in disgust.
"Carl!Look,I know you haven't been the same since-since-since you-Dad died," said Matthew,trying to remain calm.
Chas stared at him.It wasn't like him to fumble with his words.
"Oh you might as well tell everyone now!I need to tell everyone!This is breaking me Matt!" cried Carl,tears streaming down his face.
Anya stared at her father.She had never seen him cry before.It wasnt supposed to happen.You're not supposed to see your own dad cry,she thought.
"Whats...whats going on?" whispered Anya.The room fell silent.
Matthew gripped his brothers arms hard."Don't do this.Dont do it,Carl!"
"Im sorry,Matt." Carl looked deep into his brothers eyes.He turned to face his daughter and his wife.Chas stared at him,unsure of what was happening.He couldn't bear to look at Anya.How could he hate her,for what he'd done himself.
"I-I killed Dad"
Anya's mouth fell open.She blinked."What?"
Carl looked down at the ground.
"Dad?Dad,you didn't do it,you told me-"
"Well I lied!"He snapped.
Chas stared at the man she thought she loved,the man who had taken two lives.She raised her hand to her mouth."I can't-I have to get out-" she ran to the door just as Jimmy was coming in."Oh!Alright?" Chas just ran straight past him. Jimmy looked around the room."Whats with her?Anway,how's everyone?I was thinking,we should have takeaway tonight,too lazy too cook!" He laughed at his own joke.When no-one else even cracked a smile he stopped.He looked between Matthew,who was holding Carl in his hands,and Carl,whose tears had dried up,and Anya,who stood stock-still staring at Carl."Whats happened?"
Matthew looked up at Jimmy,a hard look in his eyes.
"They know." Was all he had to say.
Jimmy slowly looked at Carl.
"Carl," he said,staring at his broken brother.
"Im sorry,Jim.I had to."
"Oh,Carl," Jimmy stepped towards his brother,arms hanging loosely at his sides.He took another step and went to put his arms around him.
"Don't!" Carl said suddenly."I don't deserve it." He turnede to Anya."Im sorry," he said sadly."Im sorry for everything."
He took one last look around the room,the walked out the door.
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 26, 2007 17:47:59 GMT 1
Loved it please post more soon i really like this story luv chas dingle xx |
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Post by chasdinglefan on Jun 26, 2007 18:46:12 GMT 1
please post more soon!!!!
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Post by carlsbabe on Jun 26, 2007 20:57:21 GMT 1
Matt and Jimmy stared as he left.They felt so helpless.They didn't know where their little brother was going,but they knew if they went after him he would just push them away further.
"Did ye?"
The two turned around to face their niece.
"Sorry?" asked Jimmy.
"Did ye-did ye kill Tom?"
Jimmy paused.He looked at Matthew.Matthew looked back at him.
"Maybe here isn't the best place to talk about it,"he said reluctanctly.He gestured to the lounge,"Come in."
They walked in,Anya staying a few paces behind them,cradling her bump protectively.
The Kings assembled themselves,Jimmy by the mantlepiece,Matthew sitting on the sofa and Anya perched on the edge of an armchair.
She's afraid of us,realised Matthew.She thinks we killed Dad.
"No,we didnt kill our Dad.Carl did.Im sorry."
Anya had questions."Why?"
Matthew and Jimmy glanced at eachother.
"We think it was for Chas." said Jimmy.
Anya looked round at him."Chas?" she repeated.
"I don't think he meant to kill him,"interrupted Matthew,"He must have been speaking badly of Chas,and then-well-"
"Oh God."Anya buried her head in her hands.She couldn't believe her dad could do this.Silence fell in the lounge.
"Anya,"said Jimmy.She felt an arm around her.
"Please don't,you know,tell anyone.It was a mistake,he didn't mean to do it."
"I-I won't.But,how could he?"
"We don't know,kid." said Jimmy,giving her a hug.
Matthew looked out the window,wondering where Carl was.He noticed a car pulling up in the drive.Suddenly,he jumped up off the sofa.
"What?Whats wrong?"asked Jimmy.
Matthew walked slowly over to the window.His eyes widened."Its...its Barraclough." He looked at Anya and Jimmy.They both stared up at him with fear in there eyes.One thing hit him-Chas.
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Post by rtzen01 on Jun 26, 2007 21:12:53 GMT 1
PLease post more soon i can't wait to see what happens next |
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Post by chasdinglefan on Jun 26, 2007 21:24:06 GMT 1
post more please, can't wait to see what happens
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Post by leprecorn on Jul 8, 2007 18:12:11 GMT 1
please post some more
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Post by rtzen01 on Jul 14, 2007 20:54:01 GMT 1
please post more soon xx
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