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Post by tomsgirl on Apr 30, 2008 10:39:13 GMT 1
Aww bless your little girl I hope she is better now.
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Post by missking on May 2, 2008 17:02:58 GMT 1
hope your daughter is ok bles her  post more when you can please |
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Post by rtzen01 on May 11, 2008 20:00:39 GMT 1
Hey guys sorry I've not posted for quite a while. After thinking i am also going to end this fan-fic, but have got some ideas for a new one which i should hopefully start writing in the next few days. Anyway thanks for everyone's comments  Carl and Chas had began talking talking about Cain, but ended up shouting and getting in to an argument, the nurse said this wasn't good for Chas so they both agreed that Carl should go home for a few hours. Chas was falling asleep she was upset that Cain had caused a fight between her and Carl, as she was lying there she felt a throbbing pain going through her head, but thought it was just a head ache so decided to try and go for a sleep. Chas lay there cuddling a teddy that belonged to Bethany, but she had brought it to make her mum better. Chas's thoughts faded away slowly and this was it....................... *** A couple of hours later Carl arrived back at the hospital, and was walking through reception, he was confused as to why everyone was looking at him strangely but continued walking. He had brought Chas some flowers and he was going to say sorry, he was just about to walk through the swinging doors when a doctor came round the corner. "Mr.King ?" The Doctor asked "Yes" Carl replied confused "Mr.King can you come with me?" The doctor asked pointing to the relatives room Carl seemed reluctant but eventually went with the Doctor in to the room. The Doctor sat down and asked Carl to sit. "Mr.King shortly after you left a nurse went in to check on your wife and she was unconsiouos......we couldn't get a reaction from her so took her up for a full body CT scan and detected a bleed in her brain, more than likely due to the accident" The doctor tried to explain, but her could see Carl's face Turing paler by the second "Mr.King your wife died about and hour ago, we done everything we could, we took her up to theater but we couldn't do anything the bleed was to seveir" The doctor was about to say more when he seen a single tear escape form Carls eye and slip down his cheek, so he left after asking Carl if he wanted anyone phoned. Carl didn't know what to do or say, he was sure that Chas couldn't be dead. *** Carl walked through two doors and seen Chas lying on a table, the nurse left and it was just the two of them, he sat beside her and held her hand. It was beginning to become cold, he was trying not to cry but the tears still slipped down his cheeks, how could he tell Ellie and Bethany that there mum was dead? It still hadn't properly sank in, he rested his head beside her hand hoping that when he opened his eyes it would all have been a bad dream.......but it wasn't Carl now let the tears come pouring down his face. And this was the end. after everything they had been through, how could god be so cruel? Carl kept asking himself. HE felt so alone, how could he bring up Ellie and Bethany, he sat there in his own thoughts before whispering to Chas that he would always love her.
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Post by missking on May 11, 2008 20:07:21 GMT 1
aw bles poor carl  its great i loved this story well done it was great cant wait to read your new one |
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Post by tomsgirl on May 12, 2008 22:08:09 GMT 1
Awww what a sad ending.I loved this fan fic & I hope to read more of your stories Becca.
I am pleased that your little girl is better aswell. X
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post more when you can please 
its great i loved this story